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06/07/2006 08:58:08 AM |
Hi! Hereâs a comment from the Critique Club.
First Impression:
Nice blue. Neat light source!
Composition:
Excellent positioning of your subjects. The pages really balance the negative space. Written text would have added some interest and action to the shot. Looks a bit static.
Subject:
Meets challenge
Technical:
DOF is shallow, but I donât know how much you could have influenced or âout thoughtâ your camera settings.
Nice contrast and compromise between blowing out the light and getting hand/paper detail.
Soft focus works for this type of shot.
Summary:
Welcome to DPC. You have a good eye and you did very well with your second entry. Sooo close to a â6.â Good luck with future entries!
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06/07/2006 08:56:18 AM |
Hi! Hereâs a comment from the Critique Club.
First Impression:
Nice blue. Neat light source!
Composition:
Excellent positioning of your subjects. The pages really balance the negative space. Written text would have added some interest and action to the shot. Looks a bit static.
Subject:
Meets challenge
Technical:
DOF is shallow, but I donât know how much you could have influenced or âout thoughtâ your camera settings.
Nice contrast and compromise between blowing out the light and getting hand/paper detail.
Soft focus works for this type of shot.
Summary:
Welcome to DPC. You have a good eye and you did very well with your second entry. Sooo close to a â6.â Good luck with future entries!
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06/05/2006 11:49:44 PM |
| Does this Pen actually exist? nice color and lighting, from the pen. :) |
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06/05/2006 09:37:56 PM |
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06/05/2006 03:35:08 PM |
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06/03/2006 12:15:55 PM |
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06/03/2006 03:43:14 AM |
| Solid work - that deep blue is usually popular here. Unsure about the composition, as there seems a great deal of dead space to image left, and i can't quite see a use for it. |
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06/02/2006 01:46:05 PM |
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06/01/2006 05:40:41 PM |
| ooo, that's cool looking, where did you get that pen? |
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06/01/2006 01:08:14 AM |
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05/31/2006 08:22:13 PM |
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05/31/2006 05:46:39 PM |
| Nice sharp photo. Great angle on the shot. Very nice. |
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05/31/2006 04:08:03 PM |
| Why didn't I think of that? Good photo. |
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05/31/2006 09:55:37 AM |
| Excelent... I love this pen :P |
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05/31/2006 04:03:45 AM |
| might have been better, if there was actually something written. still nice and technically well done |
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05/30/2006 10:28:44 PM |
| Finally, a useful purpose for a pen to light up. lol I'm sure the light emitted is very limited - good exposure parameters used here in this case. |
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