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06/24/2006 11:35:50 AM |
Greetings from your own critique club.
First Impression
Very Nice shot.
Composition:
Composition is alright. May be a tighter crop would have worked better.
Subject:
Meets the challenge.
Technical (Colour and light):
The color and lighting is wonderful.
Improvement:
Little bit tighter crop
Summary:
Nice over all picture, brings back the memories of chidhood.
Congratualtions on nice capture, cheers!! |
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06/09/2006 01:19:09 AM |
double post. i suck.;p
Message edited by author 2006-06-09 05:21:38. |
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06/09/2006 01:16:23 AM |
CTPII
Hey Marge. Didn't get to vote this, actually, but I would've given it an 8. It's very well done, IMO.
Again, I'd've gone for a tighter vertical crop for this, drastically lessening the black negative space and and giving the viewer that almost "claustrophobic" feel.
But that's just me.;p |
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06/07/2006 05:25:49 PM |
Hi Margie!
Nice work here! I'll echo what others have said about the reflected light, that's really an inventive and yet totally commonplace use of a single light source. Heh! I might have tried to shoot this a more of a side angle so it looked more candid - it's easier to sneak up on people from the side than straight on, so a slightly sideways shot might have looked more.. natural? believable? Not sure of the word I'm searching for. Congrats on finishing in your own top four! |
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06/07/2006 09:45:51 AM |
Hello from Ãlex, CTP MkII
First Impression: Very clever shot.
Composition: OK, but maybe is too space up the subjects and subject is too centered, but not sure
Subject: very appropiate for the challenge. I think is original that the single light source is on the hands of the subject and the reflection is what lighten the scene.
Technical: very good IMO, very natural colors, good focus and lighting.
Improvement: maybe the composition, as told. I'm not sure, but you could have tried to crop leavin more black space on the left and so centered off the subject.
Summary: Intelligent idea and good realization, congrats on your third highest score
Ãlex
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06/05/2006 10:04:31 PM |
| Nice shot. I like the tent effect and framing of the girl with light then darkness. |
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06/05/2006 05:58:49 PM |
| Brilliant shot. An excellent example in reflective lighting. Nice use of negative space and comp is great. Intersting subject that I think everyone can relate to. 10 |
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06/05/2006 03:36:11 PM |
| kids hideout.... love it... |
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06/05/2006 01:37:36 AM |
| very nice shot...would have cropped a bit off the top and sides |
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06/03/2006 10:47:47 AM |
| Excellent idea for a picture |
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06/02/2006 06:38:38 PM |
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06/02/2006 12:48:54 PM |
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05/31/2006 07:04:02 PM |
| well done, although a tighter crop may have suited it better |
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05/31/2006 04:11:27 PM |
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05/31/2006 02:37:55 PM |
| Bringing back memeories! Great idea. Well done. |
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05/31/2006 01:14:40 PM |
| Why not crop this a lot tighter and make it more personal? You might lose some focus that way, but I think that would be better than all the negative space. Just my opinion. |
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05/31/2006 10:29:58 AM |
| ahh - brings back childhood memories of staying up later than allowed. Nice use of lighting and excellent exposure control. Focus looks sharp. I like the catch lights in the eyes |
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05/30/2006 10:23:50 PM |
| great idea for single light. well done |
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