::: Greetings from Critique Club :::
Hi, as requested, here is an indepth critique of your submission.
First Impression - the most important one:
Interesting image, but comes across as over-processed.
Composition:
I'm not liking the fish-eye look on this image. Using the fisheye is fine, but should later be de-fished in PS with this type of shot.
Subject:
n/a
Technical (Color, focus, and light):
Color is a bit over-saturated, also seeing some artifacting in the sky.
Focus: Could be a bit sharper, details just aren't coming through for me. Isuspect you sed a fish-eye adapter in front of a P&S camera and has probably hurt the focus some.
Lighting: seems like it was nice, but over-processing has lost a lot of detail inside the arches.
To grow its vote?:
A little less processing probably would have helped on this one. Also, the defishing that I mentioned earlier.
Summary:
Overall, interesting shot. Keep at it. :-)
Hope to see more from you soon,
Leroy |
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