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06/04/2006 03:51:29 PM |
::: Critique Club :::
Hi, my name is Kari and from the critique club.
First Impression - the most important one:
Nothing is new.
Composition:
This shot lacks the use of the basic rules of composition, take a look on google at the rule of thirds and see how this can help improve the composition of this shot.
Subject:
does it or not ... really self determined in this shot. This doesn't show the entry being made and enterd .. it only shows the clock on the computer.
Technical (Colour and light):
The colours is very yellow cast, this will be due to the lighting in the room.
To grow its vote?:
Think about how others are going to see the image, this is an inside joke and similar have been done a number of times I don't think any as done well.
Summary:
From your portfolio you have some good work, can't wait to see of it in the challenges.
If you've got any questions about this critique, please feel free to contact me via
the PM system.
Cheers
Kari |
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05/30/2006 02:02:56 PM |
| I think I would have liked this better had it been cropped |
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05/29/2006 06:21:59 PM |
| Great creativity here!! Don't know if the photo shows success though. 8 |
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05/29/2006 01:40:15 PM |
| No universality. It's an inside joke. |
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05/28/2006 06:58:01 PM |
| You really didn't try with this, did you? |
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05/28/2006 05:37:42 PM |
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05/27/2006 07:01:38 AM |
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05/26/2006 02:40:11 PM |
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05/26/2006 03:30:40 AM |
| Clever - I don't know what else to say until I read your description :) |
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05/25/2006 02:29:39 PM |
| I love your take on the challenge. |
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05/24/2006 07:59:18 PM |
| this is funny. i don't think it is a great shot on it's own, but an interesting "inside" take on the challenge. |
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05/23/2006 11:04:13 PM |
| Man, that was one HELL of a fast download/process/resize/submit there :-) |
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