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Going going and still going...
Going going and still going...
Joy Moore


Photograph Information Photographer's Comments
Challenge: Failure (Basic Editing III)
Camera: Nikon Coolpix 8700
Location: Saugerties, NY
Date: May 23, 2006
Aperture: f/3.5
ISO: 50
Shutter: 1/79.6
Galleries: Cityscape, Photojournalism
Date Uploaded: May 23, 2006

brightness/contrast, desaturation

This store has been going out of business for years.

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Place: 56 out of 129
Avg (all users): 5.1991
Avg (commenters): 7.0000
Avg (participants): 4.7708
Avg (non-participants): 5.3146
Views since voting: 743
Views during voting: 286
Votes: 226
Comments: 8
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06/06/2006 04:32:06 AM
Hello from the critique club!

Composition - Not bad actually too bad the reflection kinda makes the text very hard to read. Maybe a wider frame could have given this more power then this is actually giving it.

Technical - Not much techinque at all actually, nothing much to say, its pretty much out of the camera with some improved contrast.

Overall - ~5.2 is a good score for this pic I think. It fits the theme very well wich I think actually helps you the most, but the rest of the image really needs to be improved on.

Please contact me if you have any comments on my critique.

Regards Bolti
 Comments Made During the Challenge
05/30/2006 06:11:35 AM
Simple but excellent.
05/26/2006 11:42:30 PM
The reflection distracts a little bit, the photo fits the challenge perfect.
05/25/2006 07:21:09 AM
The black and white captures the feelings of failure.
05/24/2006 09:31:24 PM
Great tonal range and excellent lighting. I also like your composition as the lettering and the Sale Sale sign serve to lead the eye in and around the entire frame.
05/24/2006 04:36:37 PM
nice composition, I like the reflection in the glass, but I wish there were some way you could've reduced the glare a bit, I like that it's in B&W also, nice work
05/24/2006 02:23:44 PM
Fits challenge but a lot of reflection....6
05/24/2006 12:08:12 PM
good picture, but the reflection makes it a little frustrating on the eyes


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