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06/06/2006 01:27:26 PM |
::: Critique Club :::
Hi, my name is Kari and from the critique club.
First Impression - the most important one:
Lovely picture ... she looks a little uncomfortable .. but I think it is the outfit.
Composition:
This is good, the eyes are on the thirds line, the way that is is looking up captures the colours in her eyes, the shoulders look a little stiff and uncomfortable - perhaps an unnatural pose for this child.
Subject:
This really does meet the challenge well ... so often we forget about children being our success (even if not our own).
Technical (Colour and light):
There appears to be a little much red in the face, though this may be her. The focus is good and crisp so that we cn make out each freckle.
To grow its vote?:
I think that the other crop you have in your portfolio may have done better ... it removes the suface fluffyness of the dress which the child looks slightly uncomfortable in. Although it doesn't seem quite as sharp and this may be why you choose not to enter than one.
Summary:
This is a really good pic, I hope you offered her dad a print.
If you've got any questions about this critique, please feel free to contact me via
the PM system.
Cheers
Kari |
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05/30/2006 05:09:27 AM |
| very nice photo........... |
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05/29/2006 07:42:58 PM |
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05/29/2006 04:42:46 PM |
| Fantastic portrait! Wonderful colors and perfect clarity --- Great job! |
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05/27/2006 02:14:02 PM |
| great colors and a priceless expression on her face! |
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05/26/2006 03:02:56 PM |
| Great photo. It captures a wonderful expression in a great setting. 10 |
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05/26/2006 02:44:12 PM |
| Very nice eyes...nice blue and yellow |
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05/26/2006 06:07:41 AM |
| Nice colours, and nice cheeky grin. |
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05/25/2006 11:28:54 AM |
| What I see is a Lady (below) and the Not-so-Ladylike (above). Good job! |
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05/25/2006 07:53:43 AM |
| great colors and expression 9 |
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05/24/2006 11:46:28 PM |
Her eyes are beautiful. The background is very nice!
Message edited by author 2006-06-01 08:30:33. |
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05/24/2006 07:21:35 PM |
| I really like this photo - it's a bit quirky and I like the way the hat seems to lengthen the girl's already-long eyelashes. |
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05/24/2006 09:33:59 AM |
| What a beautiful picture! Great background and lighting, the hat fits perfectly. And I'm sure she is this precious and perfect allllll the time (spoken by a father of two...) :-) |
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05/24/2006 04:59:37 AM |
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05/24/2006 01:00:38 AM |
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05/23/2006 09:15:33 PM |
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