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06/03/2006 03:45:02 PM |
::: Critique Club :::
Hi, my name is Kari and from the critique club.
First Impression - the most important one:
Wow ... hmmmm .. ok nice body.
Composition:
I think this suits this shot. I feel personally it is really centred .. and I am not a fan of this .. but for this shot it seems to work well. You have good position of the face .. and the lighting seems to work showing good body definition.
Subject:
meets the challenge ... and does so in a huge way.
Technical (Colour and light):
ok .. hard to say really .. its red .. got to be red .. .and shows read. ... it is really sharp .. and still red. you can see the water spots on the stomach ...
To grow its vote?:
I really don't know .. I took a look at the others .. and they seemed a little more 'real' to me .. if you know what i mean ... picking a theroretical place could be a minor issue .. but you depicted it well.
Summary:
Great shot .. well done.
If you've got any questions about this critique, please feel free to contact me via
the PM system.
Cheers
Kari |
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05/29/2006 11:48:14 AM |
| This pose is like the "strong man" at the circus, without the barbells. You're kinda cute, ya know it?? |
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05/29/2006 11:21:13 AM |
| self portrait? sheesh you have a big chest :) |
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05/28/2006 07:49:07 PM |
| terrific expressiveness from the model. I'd say the "Hell" was his own anger. 8 |
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05/24/2006 11:47:44 AM |
| JP this is really good! (Bet you didn't think anyone would recognize you!) Love the background - nice symmetry too. Well done! |
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05/23/2006 03:24:29 PM |
| Dangerous colors and good expression by the model. |
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05/23/2006 02:09:27 PM |
| I think you should have that molar checked by a dentist! ;-) Seriously, a well done image. Good concept. The redish area on the lower right (my right) body seems a bit odd on my monitor. Sort of "splotchy". Otherwise, I like it! |
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05/23/2006 05:40:19 AM |
| I am convinced!!!! Wow, I'm glad I cancelled my reservation when I was six years old. (John 3:16, It's not just for football games!) |
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05/23/2006 03:54:53 AM |
| OMG alfresco? You look like a young George Atlas! I really like the steamy effect. Great pic! 10. |
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05/22/2006 06:07:28 PM |
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05/22/2006 02:59:17 PM |
| very interesting picture as well as idea |
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05/22/2006 08:20:30 AM |
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05/21/2006 11:13:19 PM |
| very Graphic, a lot of halo's on the hands & neck....Better processing would have been a ..8 Sorry..6 |
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05/21/2006 08:26:42 PM |
| you put in a lot of work for this shot...well done, very creative...BTW, Hell will be a lot worse than this |
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