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06/01/2006 07:03:45 PM |
--Trading Post Comment--
Congrats on a nice finish and your second highest score so far.
Camera Work/Technical: Great focus and really nice detail capture. The sweat beads, the zipper and the leather texture all jump out and grab the viewer's eye.
Lighting: Very well done, and I'd call it a successful first. I like the mood created by the lighting, but I'd like to see that right eye with a bit more detail.
Composition/Content: This is a very strong composition that benefits from the strong expression here.
My Opinion: Great work, and a fine score. I think with some detail in that eye, you'd have easily been at a 7.
Eric
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05/28/2006 02:09:56 PM |
My comment during the voting still stands. I gave it an 8. |
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05/28/2006 07:08:56 AM |
Trading Post comment
The first impression that comes across is one of serious intent. The lighting works very well, though I'd have liked just a touch more on the left to see just a bit of the other eye. The framing and angle of your head works perfectly, and I like the way the V in the jacket echos the V that's formed on your forehead. I also like the subtle gradation on the background color, which adds depth. Very well done!
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05/26/2006 11:42:53 AM |
This was a wonderful portrait and I truly thought it would be ranked much higher than it was. I love the lighting and shadows! |
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05/26/2006 11:38:51 AM |
Originally posted by Jutilda: This should've ranked higher. I really like it. |
Ditto that! |
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05/26/2006 08:58:03 AM |
This should've ranked higher. I really like it. |
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Comments Made During the Challenge  |
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05/24/2006 10:54:06 AM |
Everything works together really well in this shot - the lighting, attire, gaze and background together give an almost sinister (for lack of a better word) effect. The lighting and focus on the front eye really force the viewer to connect with the subject. Excellent! |
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05/23/2006 03:21:58 PM |
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05/23/2006 03:15:34 AM |
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05/22/2006 09:03:21 PM |
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05/22/2006 08:41:05 AM |
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05/22/2006 04:10:12 AM |
Good lighting just a little to dark on the jacket |
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05/21/2006 05:44:01 PM |
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05/21/2006 11:39:03 AM |
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05/20/2006 06:41:32 PM |
Intersting. I like the look, but the blue cast on the left side of the face is distracting. Very sharp, and moody. |
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05/20/2006 07:39:18 AM |
Great self portrait and a good title (took me a second to get it). |
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05/20/2006 06:57:30 AM |
Good idea to have this blue light.. Gives the picture a strange cast :o) good |
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05/20/2006 05:03:35 AM |
I like the lighting except for the blue reflected on your face. (which was probably intentional) :o) |
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05/19/2006 05:56:18 PM |
I like the light, the pose and just about everything except your persperation. It is really noticeable because its created a group of highlights on your forehead. Nit picky really, but I noticed. Still, Great work. |
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05/19/2006 01:29:06 PM |
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05/19/2006 06:45:54 AM |
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05/19/2006 05:55:43 AM |
I like it...the backgorund and outfit are good, but I just wish there was a tad more light on the left |
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05/19/2006 04:31:39 AM |
James, the names James Bond. great shot. |
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05/19/2006 04:25:36 AM |
This looks like a movie poster,good job. |
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05/19/2006 03:42:45 AM |
Nice lighting and background. This looks like a studio shot. Kind of unimaginative, though. |
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05/19/2006 01:47:57 AM |
One of my favorite shots in the challenge. A lot of character comes through. Super use of subtle colors and lighting. |
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05/18/2006 11:06:32 PM |
Well done! Very professional looking job. |
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05/18/2006 10:33:22 PM |
Sharp as a bloody tack. Great lighting. I have got to get my lens figured out for SP, it is always a hair soft. At any rate, an ace shot. |
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05/18/2006 08:57:57 PM |
Lighting is great here, I like the contrast between light and dark. Well done! |
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05/18/2006 08:57:13 PM |
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05/18/2006 08:28:22 PM |
Serious! Nice lighting. Love the leather jacket. Good job. |
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