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Challenge: Lenscap (Basic Editing III)
Camera: Canon EOS-5D
Lens: Tamron SP AF 28-105mm f/2.8 LD Aspherical IF for Canon
Location: Coffee Shop Worcester, MA
Date: May 16, 2006
Aperture: 5.6
ISO: 100
Shutter: 1/15
Galleries: Abstract, Digital Art
Date Uploaded: May 16, 2006

 In shop window with natural light. First sun in 2 week. I live in massachusetts and we have had rain for two weeks.
Settings according to light meater.
About six in the evening.
Model....
My wife
"Mysticred"....Gwen always a good sport
First picture entered using my new computer
Was using 1998 Gatway
Now a new,,,,,,, iMac
Kinda goes with pic

Statistics
Place: 165 out of 183
Avg (all users): 4.4232
Avg (commenters): 5.8000
Avg (participants): 4.2410
Avg (non-participants): 4.4873
Views since voting: 692
Views during voting: 421
Votes: 319
Comments: 7
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AuthorThread
 05/27/2006 06:17:26 PM
::: Critique Club :::

Hi, my name is Kari and from the critique club.

First Impression - the most important one:
Yay finally I get to critique a lenscap! When I first saw it I thought PIRATE .. but I am not sure what you were aiming for with the title?

Composition:
Interesting composition .. may have worked with a little more face and a little more lescap ... not sure.

Subject:
Meets the challenge ... and you have no problems with that.

Technical (Colour and light):
natural light is great .. but totally unforgiving .. and that is an issue here. the eye lkooks great ... but the skin is quite reddened.

To grow its vote?:
Think about how interesting the shot is to other people when you are taking it .. and especially when processing it ... changing to that thought may help.

Summary:
Good work .. and great try.

If you've got any questions about this critique, please feel free to contact me via the PM system.

Cheers

Kari
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 Comments Made During the Challenge
05/23/2006 05:08:48 AM
scary....
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 05/22/2006 01:41:05 PM
Very clear eye with beautiful color!
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 05/21/2006 05:58:06 PM
Nicely exposed for the eye. The lens cap seems to be sorta stuck into the picture, though.
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 05/18/2006 06:50:27 AM
Thanks for the reminder that in portraits less can be more. Great closeup.
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 05/17/2006 02:21:39 AM
what beautiful eyes and red hair! nice sharp focus and composition too
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 05/16/2006 11:06:45 PM
nice focus... though would have been nicer on lens cap :P
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