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05/27/2006 07:21:45 PM |
Hi, my name is Kari and from the critique club.
If you are not 100% certain of your readings for iso etc .. add them later .. do not guess .. cos it does not help.
First Impression - the most important one:
Very dark for ... I think I know what you are trying to do .. but am not 100% sure.
Composition:
it seems very centred .. have a look at this site .. it talks about the rule of thirds .. I found it helps heaps when composing and cropping.
[url]//www.silverlight.co.uk/tutorials/toc.html[\url]
Subject:
Meets the challenge.
Technical (Colour and light):
This is really too dark ... interesting DOF .. but it detracts i think. There is grain in the picture that may have been helped through using something like neat image .. there is freeware out there somewhere I think.
To grow its vote?:
I think this is a great second entry. You scored well and I think are learning ... good going.
Summary:
You are doing great .. keep thinking about how interesting it would be to you if your were voting and this will help to keep things in context while composing.
If you've got any questions about this critique, please feel free to contact me via the PM system.
Cheers
Kari |
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05/23/2006 01:35:35 PM |
| This is cool. I love the depth and the lighting. |
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05/19/2006 11:44:17 AM |
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05/18/2006 04:15:40 PM |
| I like the three dementional effect on this. The DOF that you chose really add depth to the photo. |
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05/18/2006 10:06:17 AM |
| Neat idea and good use of DOF. |
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05/18/2006 08:51:50 AM |
| This meets the challenge - inanimate and arranged. I think the background objects needed to be included in the field of focus if they were to be involved in the composition, which is what still life is about IMO. A striking image though. |
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05/17/2006 10:36:43 AM |
| Check your ISO. Photo seems grainy and also too dark. Can't make out what it is. |
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05/16/2006 08:46:23 PM |
| Nice try, but unfortunately it isn't crystal clear. Your shot is let down a little it's grainy nature. Did you shoot this at a very high ISO? |
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