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05/27/2006 05:01:22 PM |
::: Critique Club :::
Hi, my name is Kari and from the critique club.
First Impression - the most important one:
A truely underrated and fantastic entry into this challenge.
Composition:
person on thirds .. yt is does seem contrived .. the building up of candy and mags is just like I think it should be for this type of shop.
Subject:
Meets the challenge extremely well.
Technical (Colour and light):
Flourescent (I think that is above the person) is hard .. and here it worked ... good sharp colours and lovely movement capture.
To grow its vote?:
I ahve no idea but your commentors did .. re engaging the person etc .. I think it would like fake personally .. I think it is great as it is.
Summary:
You have an awesome eye ... keep up the work.
If you've got any questions about this critique, please feel free to contact me via the PM system.
Cheers
Kari |
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05/24/2006 04:29:03 AM |
| Thank you all for the good comments and the fantastic votes. Thanks Bear_Music for nominating me. It's a great honor. |
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05/23/2006 09:49:02 AM |
| Great photograph; a perfect interpretation of an environmental portrait. His environment is literally closing in on him and it's great. His position in the frame adds even more interest. Well done. |
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05/23/2006 09:38:36 AM |
Wonderful finish for your first member's challenge. I've nominated you for a "Yappie" in this thread:
//www.dpchallenge.com/forum.php?action=read&FORUM_THREAD_ID=397372&page=1#2449996
Robt. |
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05/21/2006 07:33:05 AM |
| IMO Composition is great , evnironment is great, portrait not so! - 7 |
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05/19/2006 01:56:28 PM |
| This seems to be more of a candid than a portrait. It is also too busy for me. I think less shop and more assistant would have worked better. |
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05/19/2006 01:27:36 AM |
| Wish she was just standing there looking at the camera, doesn´t really "feel" like a portrait, more of a candid because of that. Didn´t take away points for that though. Like the shot, got a 7 from me, love that it´s so busy and still my eye is drawn to her. |
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05/18/2006 04:03:36 PM |
| Would have been much improved if the subject was looking into the camera |
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05/17/2006 06:00:53 PM |
| The forground/background is sort of busy and the subject gets a little lost. I think this would have mad a better portrait if the subject was looking at the camera. Definately tells a story, though, and is an interesting shot. |
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05/17/2006 03:31:55 AM |
| Good composition and choice of subject. |
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05/17/2006 12:30:44 AM |
| this is a brilliant shot, it cant be faulted everything hangs together , colour and composition hope it ribbons 10 |
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05/16/2006 11:49:54 PM |
| You got it all in there! Well done. 7 |
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05/16/2006 11:21:49 AM |
| Wow, how does he find anything in there? Looks chaotic. |
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05/16/2006 07:25:45 AM |
| great job, wow what a wide angle. i like it. 8 |
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05/16/2006 05:13:27 AM |
| shame that the guy is totally uninterested |
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05/16/2006 04:15:59 AM |
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05/15/2006 09:16:42 PM |
| This shot definitely satisfies the challenge... kind of looks like a collage because of all the products in the shop, yet the assistant stands out. Exposed nicely and it works because everything is in focus. Good luck with the voting because this shot is 'out of the box' |
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05/15/2006 04:52:07 PM |
| Outstanding light and DOF. |
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05/15/2006 01:18:48 PM |
| Great study and a perfect response to the challenge |
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05/15/2006 09:41:36 AM |
Ég verð fyri vonsvikum ef þessi verður ekki àtopp 5. Miðað við myndirnar sem ég hef séð àkeppninni þá er þetta ein af mjög fáum sem virkilega fylgja skylirðum sem sett voru fyrir keppnina.
Hvar á ÃÂslandi er hægt að finna svona sjoppu nú til dags? Minnir mig óneitanlega á útlenskar götusjoppur. |
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05/15/2006 09:15:00 AM |
| simple idea, nicely executed..... |
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05/15/2006 07:06:28 AM |
| Wow, I love this. How clausterphobic! Great sense of environmen and I like the slight blur. |
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05/15/2006 06:37:48 AM |
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05/15/2006 05:58:56 AM |
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05/15/2006 05:51:09 AM |
| I like this, the only improvement would be to engage the subject more. 7 |
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05/15/2006 02:01:30 AM |
| would be perfect if he were posed. well done though |
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05/15/2006 12:56:40 AM |
| this is a good picture, reminds me of my childhood. |
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05/14/2006 11:31:28 PM |
| Very much an environmental portrait, and well portrayed. I can't help thinking though, that perhaps a closer view of the shop assisant and a bit less of the shop may have even more impact - just to give more emphasis to the portrait element. |
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05/14/2006 08:38:37 PM |
| Love the colors and movement, but I sense this as a candid and not a portrait. I'd love to have her looking at you, even smiling. |
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