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05/26/2006 04:09:37 PM |
::: Critique Club :::
Hi, my name is Kari and from the critique club.
First Impression - the most important one:
You did well not to get cruel comments. This seems to be so totally out of the zone for you .. so good going to enter.
Composition:
This is great ... plays well the the thirds and leading my eyes into the shots with the arm taking a slight leading line.
Subject:
meets the challenge, but also confirms why I didn't enter. The only problem with this shot is that it is the workplace and the environment, and neither is what I would call sexy .. or interesting. Is a good shot and that is what you have been scored on.
Technical (Colour and light):
Clear crisp .. good use of DOF ... nice colours and solid office type lighting.
To grow its vote?:
This is the issue .... I think there are few of the top pictures that are taken in their own natural environment (anastasia excluded) ...but that interesting environments were sought out for the pics.
Summary:
Great shooting .. nicely away from your 'normal' shots and I think a good stretch for your skills. Well done.
If you've got any questions about this critique, please feel free to contact me via the PM system.
Cheers
Kari |
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05/16/2006 11:40:57 PM |
| I like this. It's a powerful image. Is the area around his month sharp enough though? |
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05/16/2006 05:01:19 PM |
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05/15/2006 12:03:55 PM |
| Nice use of environment, nice portrait. I think it would look more natural if he were facing more toward the computer; you could have caught him in partial profile. |
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05/15/2006 08:51:04 AM |
| good shot, but seems a little flat in color. might have an overall green cast on the whole image. 5 |
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05/14/2006 08:47:48 PM |
what no solitare on the screen??? :0P
nice lighting but kind of a frazzled snapshot |
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