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The Path Before You II
The Path Before You II
kyrielle


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Camera: Ricoh RDC-5300
Location: Japanese Gardens, Portland, Oregon
Date: Aug 9, 2003
Aperture: F/4.8
ISO: 100
Shutter: 1/181 sec.
Date Uploaded: Aug 13, 2003

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Comments: 1
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 My attempt to improve on my original entry for this challenge, after some of the comments. Re-shot at a different angle and on a sunny (rather than cloudy) day.

I held this image to the challenge rules, since I'm trying to compare it with a challenge image.

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 08/12/2003 09:24:06 PM
I'm looking at both right now, and this one is definitely an improvement. It doesn't look washed out (which the other did), and I do like that the lighting is not as even. I think I would have liked it better if the lit parts had been in the foreground and faded to shade in the background; this way looks slightly odd to me. But that would have probably been more problematic in terms of getting lighting.

This one also looks crisper, by the way. I don't know how much of that is lighting, but it looks overall like you got a crisper shot. Since your shutter speed is quicker on this one, I suspect you may have had a little inadvertant motion on the other.

The only way the other one wins out is it's a slightly better angle for the terms of the challenge.
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