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05/21/2006 04:15:08 PM |
Greetings from the Critique Club Alexej!
First impression: Great shot.
This is a difficult image for me to give a long critique for as there isn't much I would've done differently. A tighter crop on the right would've gotten rid of the distracting neon sign. It really pulls your eye away from the subject. If you'd have cropped it tighter on the left you'd have taken the hotel sign out but the people as well. I think the shot needs the people so I think it's good over there.
Overall a very nice shot and probably would've scored better if there wasn't a similar image entered in the same challenge.
Thanks for the opportunity to critique this shot Alexej.
Cheers - Phil |
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05/16/2006 11:13:26 PM |
| I love it how the bus is so colorful and everything else is allmost gray. Beautiful photo |
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05/16/2006 03:08:17 PM |
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05/15/2006 08:38:08 PM |
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05/15/2006 09:51:10 AM |
| Interesting that there is another shot more or less from the same spot in the challenge, the one with the blue tram. |
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05/14/2006 01:44:34 PM |
| I like the other one better :-P just realized that one can actually see what number tram yours is, too. Ok, knowing it helps... |
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05/14/2006 03:16:23 AM |
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05/14/2006 01:39:14 AM |
| Wonderful color contrast. |
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05/13/2006 04:27:25 PM |
Oh,this image comes sooo close! Love the movement in the tram. But think about cropping it to eliminate the signs "hotel" and "schaepp.." You still get all the effect of the moving vehicle without the distractions of the lettering.
What a good job of seeing! |
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05/13/2006 03:07:00 AM |
| Fantastic clarity...combining stillness and movement. |
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05/12/2006 08:06:39 AM |
| What!? Didn't I already see this in the challenge? In any case, thise one is better excecuted than the previous one I saw. However, the neon yellow sign on the upper right is very distracting. |
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05/12/2006 02:18:32 AM |
| Nice motion capture, and the people add good size perspective. |
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05/11/2006 08:44:35 PM |
| So... was this an organized photoshoot or the biggest coincidence in dpc history? I voted on a VERY similar shot not two minutes ago. This is wider, but it's not a different viewpoint. |
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05/11/2006 04:09:43 PM |
| I love that you caught the tram on a curved portion of the track. Far superior to your average fly-by, and technically well done to boot. Nice work! |
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05/11/2006 08:33:53 AM |
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05/10/2006 10:22:03 PM |
| That one of the pics I had in mind. Nicely done. Everything is sharp. - 8 |
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