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05/13/2006 02:00:31 PM |
Critique Club:
The subject isn't that bad. The idea is good but the executin isn't that great. The colors are good. Like the brownish feelding of this picture. I think you could use this background for future shots. It looks like fun to shoot. In this photo the main subject is hard to spot. Is it the shades, is it the table, is it the white light coming in, is it the mirror? My idea for this would have been to take a close up of the reflection at the end of the table. For your first challange this isn't so bad. Keep it up and don't quit.
Good luck in future challanges :)
Best regard, Arni
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05/08/2006 06:20:55 PM |
| althoguh an interesting idea, it was not well excicuted. The focus seems a bit soft, that bright spot is way to over exposed and the rest is under exposed. More work on the lighting is nessisary |
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05/08/2006 03:09:05 PM |
| the light shining through takes away from the rhythm. |
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05/04/2006 04:30:00 PM |
| Just not very interesting. No great tone or contrast or focus. - 3 |
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05/04/2006 08:17:53 AM |
| This is more interesting as a thumbnail. I'd like more color, and something extra to look at that helps me understand what you are trying to convey. |
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05/03/2006 08:26:14 PM |
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05/02/2006 11:44:01 PM |
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