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05/19/2006 07:48:53 PM |
Greetings from the Critique Club...
Overall, I liked the image. What I liked most was the color and the lighting, which gave the image good clarity. Since there are so many movies that involve painting/painters the moment I saw this it just felt appropriate for the challenge. So good choice there.
Compositionally, it works but the crop is a bit too tight, IMO. The main issue with that is the painting itself which is close to the edges. Normally I would avoid that by cropping tighter or including more space. The models on the other hand are cropped very well. I like how they are flush against the frame.
The image also seems a bit blurry in some areas. Not sure if that was part of the original image or due to neatimage. I think if this had better overall sharpeness and some more spacing around the painting this would have scored much higher.
Let me know if you have any questions. Good luck and I look forward to seeing more of your work.
Edited for clarity.
Message edited by author 2006-05-19 23:51:52. |
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05/09/2006 11:39:01 AM |
| the grammar of your title is awkward and the models don't look very conspiratorial. I suppose they are the tourists who blunder onto the conspiracy and then when the gangsters converge prove to be more resourceful than you originally thought. Sorry if I'm missing something. Is that reflection on the painting supposed to mean something? Right now it seems like you found a cute title to fit your photo into the challenge. |
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05/09/2006 02:19:45 AM |
| Nice shot, I like your idea. |
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05/08/2006 09:54:24 PM |
| good shot for the challenge |
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05/08/2006 10:01:39 AM |
| Good post-processing: half photo, half watercolor. Nicely contrasted and saturated, too. |
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05/08/2006 07:32:41 AM |
| the title is ok but the photo is not telling me what it is bout. nothing really says conspiriacy. The photo itslef is ok but the hand infront of the painting seems blurry or distorted. although the smile is nice conspiracys aren't usually fun. what seems to be a reflection int he painting is distracting. |
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05/08/2006 06:39:55 AM |
| Very cute :) Tells a story, and almost looks like a candid shot :) Great job. |
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05/08/2006 04:59:12 AM |
| Very clever.....I really like your title, as it really suits the image.....Great clarity, and love how the camera is in the rule of thirds..... |
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