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05/19/2006 11:33:52 AM |
Greetings from the Critique Club Lawrence!
Initial impression: Good shot and creatively fitting title. The color of the sky to the left is very nice and the subject is certainly beautiful.
As was mentioned below, the sky on the right side of the image is blown out which causes a bit of a distraction. It's a shame mother nature didn't work with you here and give you the same sky overall. This would've helped to make it fron page material. Also, while the 1/80 shutter speed gives her a sense of movement it also caused a bit of overall blur which also might have hindered you from a better score (not to say 6.03 is bad but you know what I mean). I think her being totally frozen in mid air would've worked out better rather than showing movement.
Overall a lovely image and great idea that you should be proud of.
Thanks for the opportunity to critique your photo Lawrence.
Cheers - Phil |
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05/14/2006 06:38:08 AM |
| Nice idea but I think you should have cropped the house on the left, it doesn't really add much to the picture. |
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05/13/2006 10:03:37 PM |
| Nice shot. The blown out sky on the upper right is distracting though in my opinion. |
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05/12/2006 03:57:43 PM |
| Very cute and delicate as subject appears to float on air. Bump. |
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05/12/2006 01:46:14 PM |
| Not bad at all... good idea for the title, and great execution. However I find the space to the left of the model a bit distracting and would crop it out. |
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05/10/2006 09:21:40 AM |
| Nice image! The title describes the movie, it's not the title of the movie. But I won't detract too much for that. |
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05/09/2006 06:34:02 PM |
| clever but over blown on the left side. |
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05/09/2006 01:42:32 PM |
| Fantastic idea and well done indeed, hope your shot does well. Wonderful colurs in an outstanding composition. |
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05/09/2006 02:08:14 AM |
| Great capture. I like the photo. It almost has a surreal look. Don't know why, but it somehow reminds me of the paintings of Edward Hopper. |
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05/08/2006 10:53:29 PM |
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05/08/2006 09:42:37 PM |
| Great sky & I love the capture, well done |
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05/08/2006 01:31:19 PM |
| Good thinking... Nice picture :o) |
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05/08/2006 09:47:41 AM |
| I'll give you the stretch on the title. I like the clouds on the left but think it is too washed out on the right sky. I would like ti more if her left foot was not blurry. To really go on the mary poppins bit some sidewalk chalk would have been nice too. |
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05/08/2006 02:22:37 AM |
| Very nice shot. Though maybe a faster shutter speed could have reduced the blur on the left foot. Nonetheless very creative - 8 |
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05/07/2006 08:53:44 PM |
| a fun image. looks like she's flying |
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