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05/11/2006 06:26:14 AM |
**Greeting from the Critique Club**
Well, the first thing I noticed in this image was either the sensor dust or dirt on the mirror. I would also have liked to see the "photographers comment" box filled out.
I would have like to see a tigher crop off the top as I find the negative space there to be a waste but just becase of its size. I like the angle of the glass but the water droplets on the rim of it I find to be a little distracting. I would have also liked to see the yellow from the lemon pop a bit more which could have been done through post-processing. Actually tho whole image could use a bit of brightening. There is no hotspots from the ice or glass which I find a lot of people don't see when shooting shiney objects. I do like the never ending mirror look tho as it draws the eyes into the nothingness. All in all it is not a shot I'd hang on my wall but one I would (if cleaned up) see in an advertisement. Good luck and keep up the good work. |
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05/03/2006 06:06:34 PM |
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05/03/2006 02:08:43 PM |
| More contrast on the yelloe lemon, let it stick out of the photo.... |
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05/01/2006 12:54:18 AM |
| a bit dull, sorry, also it's not dead centre, for me this would need to be almost symetrical, glass rotated anti clockwise to get the edges vertical and the glass dead centre, the lemon wedge right at a corner (a lime would add better colour than a lemon) |
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