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05/13/2006 09:40:07 AM |
*Critique Club*
I have to wonder how this would look with the classic 'desaturate everything but yellow' trick. I might look neat, but then again, it might just look cliche. Something worth playing with anyway.
I think that the candles add a little clutter that I feel the photo would benefit without. Not sure if crop would have helped, or maybe a different placement of the flower, but I don't feel that the flowers are adding positively to the photo.
Focus and clarity are great. Nice crispness in the flower, and the wall. I feel that the DOF works as well.
Lighting is also good. No distracting hot spots or shadows.
My eyes are drawn down the stem of the flower to the bright red of the little flag. This is where a desaturation technique might have been beneficial, as I feel the bright red placed at the bottom of the stem draws the attention away from the 'subject' to a lesser interesting part of the photo. As well, a different crop could also eliminate that.
Overall, I think that it's a very nice image with the only issues I can find to improve upon are the 'background clutter'/distracting elements.
Very nice shot. I feel it works it's way into the challenge too.
~Heather~ |
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05/07/2006 07:37:05 PM |
| Such a nice fitting tribute. Good image overall ;) |
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05/07/2006 03:11:36 PM |
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05/06/2006 06:27:49 PM |
| this is a stretch for photojournalism...more like a photo illustration, I think it would be more effective if it were only the yellow rose on the black wall. |
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05/03/2006 08:13:23 PM |
| Very nice shot tells a story, good job |
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05/03/2006 07:45:05 PM |
| Very emotive; nicely done.9 |
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05/03/2006 04:30:47 PM |
| "WOW", this is such a great photo for this challenge..... I love it..... |
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05/02/2006 08:45:13 AM |
| This is awesome! Very emotive. Executed perfectly. Definitely ought to be on the cover of a magazine! 10 |
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05/02/2006 12:30:38 AM |
hi,
this is a sad photo for sure, but i cannot fit it in the news photojournalism, maybe in magazine photojournalism ? |
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05/01/2006 02:59:23 PM |
| Nicely focused and exposed. |
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05/01/2006 07:35:51 AM |
| excellent photojournalistic shot and color |
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05/01/2006 05:53:54 AM |
| Might not make front page, but it works |
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04/30/2006 09:12:31 PM |
| Wish you luck on this one. It is an awesome photo. Great use of DOF. |
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