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06/23/2006 05:14:20 AM |
Reminds me of old, old photos in albums. They sometimes crack after a bit or get torn with handling. Like old hand tools one finds in tag sales, the surfaces worn shiny by human labour is attracive IMO. The trace of human activity - such as a plastered wall - is a subliminal language. You use it well but have a few bits of grammar yet to learn.
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06/23/2006 04:41:37 AM |
hmmm, really good picture overall, but i'm not totally digging her upper body pose=/ |
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04/30/2006 10:01:12 AM |
Originally posted by Bear_Music: HaHa! I have to laugh at the "wall crack wars". It is and it isn't! It's actually semi-amazing. For quite a long moment I thought "girl against wall urban joey", then I realized she's in a FIELD, there's a TREELINE facripesake, and I actually thought "DAMN, some killer murals in Toronto!", then reality (or rurreality?) set in and I realized you layered a wall shot into an outdoor portrait. It's bizarre.
Jutilda's comment about the Vee is spot on: foreground rock to knee back up crack is a pronounced Vee. Actually I'd call it a triangle: and there's even more of them:
1. The most foreground rock is a triangle
2. The two legs make a triangle
3. The upper body makes a triangle from the 2 hands up to the head
4. The two long foreground grass stalks make a vee that never completes a triangle visually.
So this whole compsition is messing with triangles, EXCEPT that the main composition is composed of three distinctly horizontal zones overlaid with a strong vertical zone (the figure). Altogether, very satisfying if a touch bizarre. |
Yes, it is a wall... :-)
And the triangle composition was intentional, but not all of the ones you've listed of course. :-)
I'll letcha keep going... |
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04/30/2006 08:45:09 AM |
Lady in the Water - July 21, 2006 - I'm so excited. |
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04/29/2006 11:39:17 PM |
HaHa! I have to laugh at the "wall crack wars". It is and it isn't! It's actually semi-amazing. For quite a long moment I thought "girl against wall urban joey", then I realized she's in a FIELD, there's a TREELINE facripesake, and I actually thought "DAMN, some killer murals in Toronto!", then reality (or rurreality?) set in and I realized you layered a wall shot into an outdoor portrait. It's bizarre.
Jutilda's comment about the Vee is spot on: foreground rock to knee back up crack is a pronounced Vee. Actually I'd call it a triangle: and there's even more of them:
1. The most foreground rock is a triangle
2. The two legs make a triangle
3. The upper body makes a triangle from the 2 hands up to the head
4. The two long foreground grass stalks make a vee that never completes a triangle visually.
So this whole compsition is messing with triangles, EXCEPT that the main composition is composed of three distinctly horizontal zones overlaid with a strong vertical zone (the figure). Altogether, very satisfying if a touch bizarre.
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04/29/2006 10:01:28 PM |
Awesome processing. It looks like somebody dropped the print and then ran over it a couple times and poured coke on it, then you picked it back up and scanned it. Sweet. |
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04/27/2006 05:57:59 PM |
Jutilda commented on the "wall crack".
Hmm, that's not a wall, is it? Your mastery of merging layers is admirable, Joey! Wish I could produce something nearly as good. |
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04/26/2006 08:59:43 PM |
The diagonal of her leg meeting the opposite diagonal of the crack in the wall almost creates a "V." Nice work!! I like it. |
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