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05/06/2006 10:43:36 AM |
Greetings from the Critique Club...
Hi Moniepenny :)
This is an intereresting scene and the silhouetted ducks really make it work nicely. Your subject standing on the pier is visible but he's too dark to really stand out enough to be 'noticed' on a site like this where the photo probably gets very little viewing time. The composition is nice, but I would have probalby framed out the skyline at the top. Personally, I don't think it's adding anything to the theme and it's creating an eye-pulling contrast away from the subject(s) of the image. That tree line is also pretty soft. Maybe some additional depth of field would have improved that area. I see that your camera doesn't support that level of manual control though... When you are limited by the camera, you have to work within it's strengths. I have a camera similar to this (S410) and it does make nice photos :)
John Setzler
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04/30/2006 03:31:25 PM |
the background is a little bit bnlurry |
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04/30/2006 11:51:35 AM |
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04/30/2006 07:30:48 AM |
meets thechallenge and nice photo. 7. |
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04/30/2006 06:44:50 AM |
Good entry, meets the challenge but needs a slight CCW rotation. |
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04/29/2006 06:13:57 PM |
beautiful orange and blue in the water on both sides of the dock but the dock and person take away from the picture |
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04/29/2006 05:39:41 AM |
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04/28/2006 11:32:25 PM |
Lovely silhouette but I seem to fail to see the compliments. |
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04/27/2006 07:34:46 AM |
nice shiloute (or how ever you spell it) |
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04/26/2006 07:21:09 PM |
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04/26/2006 06:48:02 PM |
2 - More 'play' with the colors and a nudge rotate up on the right, make this better in my opinion. Looks like it has some grain/gamma issues as well. Like to see this shot have been all about at least one set of complementary colors primarily. |
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04/26/2006 06:33:57 PM |
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04/26/2006 02:02:54 AM |
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