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05/07/2006 04:03:56 AM |
*** Critique Club ***
First impressions: Relaxing feel, pleasing colour
Composition: Placement of the bubbles works well, ones on the right and three almost center. Also, the leftmost, rightmost and uppermost bubbles form a triangle. The triangle is a key design element that keeps the viewer moving from one section of the image to another.
Exposure: Exposure may be a little under though no areas seem too black. Exposing more may have blown out some of the white areas.
Impact: This is where I think the image is lacking a bit, if only due to the softness of the focus. Having sharper focus on the central bubbles I think would improve the photo.
Keep experimenting and have fun.
Colette |
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05/01/2006 01:28:28 PM |
I just LOVE water shots - gr8 work. |
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05/01/2006 12:51:39 AM |
A levels adjustment wouldn't hurt here; it just looks too murky, inverted or not |
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04/30/2006 07:37:47 PM |
cool, love the ripples, the green color really sets this off too. |
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04/30/2006 07:14:03 PM |
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04/29/2006 05:52:22 PM |
The color is a bit muted, but nice capture |
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04/29/2006 03:07:48 PM |
Typical water drop shot but being a negative adds to it I think. Great tones. |
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04/28/2006 09:57:15 PM |
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04/26/2006 03:57:53 AM |
The border is very heavy and rather distracting from the image. The flow of the water ripples are good, but overall the image looks rather soft on focus. |
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