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Here I am
Here I am
marvin


Photograph Information Photographer's Comments
Challenge: Window Framed (Advanced Editing IV)
Camera: Canon EOS-350D Rebel XT
Lens: Canon EF-S 18-55mm f/3.5-5.6 USM
Location: Reykjavík
Date: Apr 20, 2006
Aperture: F/5,6
ISO: 100
Shutter: 1/100 sec.
Galleries: Portraiture, Architecture
Date Uploaded: Apr 20, 2006

Taken the first summerday in Iceland. Taken at a gardenhouse at a local park.
Used autolevels, curves, increased saturation and USM.

Statistics
Place: 159 out of 180
Avg (all users): 4.6987
Avg (commenters): 4.7778
Avg (participants): 4.6333
Avg (non-participants): 4.7383
Views since voting: 708
Views during voting: 324
Votes: 239
Comments: 12
Favorites: 0


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05/02/2006 09:45:22 PM
*Critique Club*

"Here I am" is a nice addition into the Window Framed challenge.

This was a very interesting location with a great little face to grab our attention. The image feels natural, unfortunately the graffiti is there but that is something we cannot avoid sometimes.

The image does feel dark. I understand that more then likely you were working with natural light, which is impossible to control. The lighting takes away from the little girl. I think it was an interesting pavilion to take a shot at. I just wish there was a better placement of the girl because this is a really cute idea.
 Comments Made During the Challenge
04/30/2006 10:50:23 AM
the lighting is a little flat, which is hard cause it is natural light (or looks to be), some contrast whould help the image over all and add some dynamics- (light and shadow)
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04/30/2006 06:47:07 AM
Haha, love the expression on the kid, makes this photo work :)
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04/30/2006 05:57:01 AM
Not well lit, the girl isn't enough of the shot to be dominating, and the graffiti doesnt' help. I would've chosen a different location myself.
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04/29/2006 10:02:41 PM
Great expression. Good job on the exposure. I would have put more of her in the shot.
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04/29/2006 08:24:47 PM
Cute shot... might have tried using a fill flash...
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04/29/2006 06:55:06 PM
Composition feels unbalanced... I don't like that there's a pole coming out of her head.
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04/29/2006 02:46:38 PM
I like it. It's fun! I might have cloned out the graffiti.
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04/29/2006 10:27:32 AM
seems a little grainy to me
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04/27/2006 02:54:25 PM
I can see where you were aiming for the symmetry of the pavillion but having the subject so low in the photo creates an imbalance to me. Still, I rather like the idea!
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04/25/2006 08:35:23 AM
The picture is overall too dark. The only brightness is a blown or overcast sky, which doesn't add a whole lot either. Her expression is nice, but I also feel she is being lost in the picture.
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04/24/2006 06:58:51 PM
too bad you're not allowed to clone out the graffitti in the background. otherwise it's a fun photo.
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