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05/02/2006 09:45:22 PM |
*Critique Club*
"Here I am" is a nice addition into the Window Framed challenge.
This was a very interesting location with a great little face to grab our attention. The image feels natural, unfortunately the graffiti is there but that is something we cannot avoid sometimes.
The image does feel dark. I understand that more then likely you were working with natural light, which is impossible to control. The lighting takes away from the little girl. I think it was an interesting pavilion to take a shot at. I just wish there was a better placement of the girl because this is a really cute idea. |
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04/30/2006 10:50:23 AM |
the lighting is a little flat, which is hard cause it is natural light (or looks to be), some contrast whould help the image over all and add some dynamics- (light and shadow) |
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04/30/2006 06:47:07 AM |
Haha, love the expression on the kid, makes this photo work :) |
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04/30/2006 05:57:01 AM |
Not well lit, the girl isn't enough of the shot to be dominating, and the graffiti doesnt' help. I would've chosen a different location myself. |
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04/29/2006 10:02:41 PM |
Great expression. Good job on the exposure. I would have put more of her in the shot. |
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04/29/2006 08:24:47 PM |
Cute shot... might have tried using a fill flash... |
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04/29/2006 06:55:06 PM |
Composition feels unbalanced... I don't like that there's a pole coming out of her head. |
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04/29/2006 02:46:38 PM |
I like it. It's fun! I might have cloned out the graffiti. |
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04/29/2006 10:27:32 AM |
seems a little grainy to me |
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04/27/2006 02:54:25 PM |
I can see where you were aiming for the symmetry of the pavillion but having the subject so low in the photo creates an imbalance to me. Still, I rather like the idea! |
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04/25/2006 08:35:23 AM |
The picture is overall too dark. The only brightness is a blown or overcast sky, which doesn't add a whole lot either. Her expression is nice, but I also feel she is being lost in the picture. |
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04/24/2006 06:58:51 PM |
too bad you're not allowed to clone out the graffitti in the background. otherwise it's a fun photo. |
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