The subject fits the challenge perfectly, but, technically, the shot doesn't appear to have been very carefully thought out. I understand that this is more a "record" picture than an "artful" one, but even with what it is, I feel it could have been better. Overall, it looks unappealingly under-exposed; the horizon looks tilted, which takes away from the prominence of the under-construction building; and the shot includes too much of the unnecessary background. Further, most of these issues could have ΓΆ€” while not violating any rules ΓΆ€” been addressed with some photo-editing software, prior to the entry's submission. So, I like the image, but think it could have been much better. |