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05/27/2006 12:01:01 PM |
| I would try a different composition on this one. Zooming out would have worked well, especially if you keep in mind the rule of thirds.Having this lonely looking house sitting in a vast empty landscape would really emphasize what you are going for. The photo could also do with some sharpening and white balance adjustment. Great subject though! |
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04/23/2006 08:59:30 AM |
| i'd give it a bit more room on both sides. 8 |
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04/22/2006 11:56:13 PM |
| it's very blurry and uninteresting...perhaps move around and see if there is a better perspective og this old building...as it is it looks bland and uninspiring |
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04/21/2006 05:51:39 PM |
| number of composition problems. You have the grass and treeline split at 50% and then you center up the hut. Shifting the camera to place the house in the lower right corner and setting the treeline at a rule of third would help this picture. |
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04/21/2006 05:13:20 PM |
| Needs to be sharper, more color saturation. |
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04/20/2006 10:29:59 PM |
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04/20/2006 09:31:15 AM |
| Image looks out of focus and washed out. Perhaps more contrast would help, also not having the shack so centered would improve the composition. |
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04/20/2006 08:13:14 AM |
| The shot seems a little soft to me. I like the faint line of green heading to the building... perhaps moving the building a bit more out of the center of the shot would also help? |
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04/19/2006 01:03:48 PM |
| Seems a little soft, or slightly out of focus. Would like to see it fill the frame a bit more too. Definitly old, good job. |
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04/19/2006 12:07:55 PM |
| i might've cropped this a little tighter, nice shot tho |
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