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04/29/2006 04:43:05 AM |
I love this portrait! Her eye(s) are so huge and beautiful. What works for me is the fact that she is not smiling - and I really like the overall composition. |
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04/29/2006 04:32:43 AM |
Greetings from the Critique Club!
This is a very strong portrait to critique. My first impression is a very good one. On the technical side I think this is very well executed - I like the lighting, the skin tones are good, excellent use of DOF. The eye is sharp, as well as the lashes, which I really think is critical if you are going to zoom in this close. I also like the model's expression for this image - almost undefinable, makes you wonder what she is thinking.
My only suggestion on composition after looking at this for some time would be to crop in tighter on the right - essentially remove some of the negative space on the left. Not a lot, just a vertical strip from the left so that the curve of her shoulder meets the left lower corner. That still leaves a lot of negative space and at the same time I feel like it will pull her eye into the shot a little more and make it a bit more powerful. I'm not really sure that would work, just a suggestion there. The image is excellent as it stands. I see you had a lot of outakes posted and I like your choice of entry. 13th place is nothing to sneeze at after all :-)
Looking forward to seeing more of your work.
-Rich |
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04/26/2006 06:02:46 PM |
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04/24/2006 06:13:02 AM |
Sweet, sweet little girl. What a wonderful portrait. |
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04/24/2006 05:26:04 AM |
Excellent, excellent shot. A very cute kid, too... or at least half of a very cute kid! :) |
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04/24/2006 05:05:54 AM |
Strong and immediate pleasant impact. Congratulations on your top 20 finish. |
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04/24/2006 04:42:14 AM |
that is one beautiful kid!! |
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04/23/2006 10:25:38 PM |
I thought this would be Nics submission :) Very well executed and a nice score to top it off. |
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04/23/2006 09:09:21 PM |
Are you sure you aren't copying some of my techniques? ;)
Great portrait.. between you and Bazz, Team Pentax continues to be a contender eh? |
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04/23/2006 09:00:34 PM |
You were ribbed as you so deserved a ribbon in every sense.....I gave you one of your "10's" as I absolutely love this portrait..... What a little charmer you have there with magic blue eyes.....
How did some of our members, give this image the following when voting,
3 - ones
1 - two
3 - threes
Message edited by author 2006-04-24 01:06:19. |
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04/23/2006 08:57:51 PM |
Knew this was yours Matt...wish it finished higher for you. What a gorgeous child...those eyes are amazing! |
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04/23/2006 07:50:52 PM |
If this does not ribbon there is something seriously wrong with the voters, excellent! |
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04/23/2006 02:17:51 PM |
Lovely, pure portrait. I like this composition very much. Great job. |
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04/23/2006 01:18:30 PM |
A nice photo. Just a little to bright in my eyes, but still great. Good luck. |
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04/23/2006 11:49:32 AM |
This is a stunning shot. How I wish I could get my kids to sit still enough to even attempt something like this. Bumping up. |
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04/22/2006 10:09:59 AM |
Sweetest one of all in this challenge :) 10. |
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04/21/2006 04:58:25 AM |
This is adorable. The eye color really jumps out and well as the lips. 10 |
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04/20/2006 04:41:04 PM |
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04/20/2006 06:01:34 AM |
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04/19/2006 08:07:32 PM |
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04/19/2006 03:20:09 AM |
Nice close-up. Lighting looks good and picture is sharp. That stare is pretty intense. |
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04/19/2006 02:59:49 AM |
this is a very nice high key photo. all attention seem to be collected on the eyes of the child. beautiful. |
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04/19/2006 01:54:44 AM |
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04/18/2006 06:58:27 PM |
Nice job nailing the focus on her beautiful eyes. |
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04/18/2006 03:03:03 PM |
Best baby portrait for me |
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04/18/2006 12:08:08 PM |
What a beautiful little girl! Great photo! |
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04/18/2006 11:01:15 AM |
beautiful. and interesting crop. top 10 |
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04/18/2006 05:44:13 AM |
the detail of her eye is simply stunning |
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04/17/2006 06:18:03 PM |
Adorable with awesome eyes! |
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04/17/2006 01:52:56 PM |
Great shot. Good crop and beautiful eye and lip colors against the soft lightness of everything else. My first 10 ever given. |
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04/17/2006 01:44:08 PM |
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04/17/2006 01:03:39 PM |
Cool! The color in the lips and eye, and the simple composition created by the tight creative crop go great together. |
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04/17/2006 12:53:25 PM |
Great crop.
The eyes are so alive in this capture.
9
Good luck
Kev |
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04/17/2006 06:50:01 AM |
she looks familair, not sure why. cute! |
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04/17/2006 05:57:23 AM |
I normaly don't like the 1/2 face thing, but you made it work!! Good job. |
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04/17/2006 04:48:06 AM |
Wow, i love this, shame i can't vote! Good luck :] |
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04/17/2006 04:00:38 AM |
How Striking! I love the high key look of this. It's absolutely stunning! 10 |
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04/17/2006 03:59:44 AM |
Blue eye is piercing...Love the high key...either this is a top 3 finish or my belief that kids pictures get voted lower by the masses will be proven...GREAT shot |
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04/17/2006 03:51:15 AM |
wow! truly angelic! those eyes are amazing! Well done, hope you do well with this... |
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04/17/2006 02:15:49 AM |
Red lips, blue eye, soft skin and blonde hair on a white background. Looks nice. The eye is somewhat unreal for me though. |
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04/16/2006 11:41:14 PM |
terrific! wonderful angelic shot! congratulations |
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04/16/2006 09:28:51 PM |
Beautiful in every sense.....I love it.....A "10" from me... |
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04/16/2006 09:28:06 PM |
She has one beautiful eye. Does she have another??? Sorry, I'm just not a fan of the whole "split face" movement. |
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04/16/2006 09:15:50 PM |
wow...she went from devil to angel. |
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04/16/2006 08:32:34 PM |
Hi Nic, (or Matt). Love the crop and good luck as usual. I'll be back to score later. |
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