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04/24/2006 07:18:23 PM |
::: Critique Club :::
Hi, my name is Kari and from the critique club.
First Impression - the most important one:
Completely abstract as I have no mechanical bones .. but is lovely and shiny!
Composition:
I think this is fine ... abstracts in general challenges don't seem to do as well as others ... but this is a great example .. and quite eyecatching. Once someone starts to look at it and take it in you can spend a lot of time sitting and staring.
Subject:
Meets the challenge, bang on.
Technical (Colour and light):
Funny that you get the contradictory comments we all get .. DOF great, bad etc. I like the lines in this picture, they take the eye up and then across in a pleasant manner. I just feel that this is incomplete. This is probably just me so no worries.
To grow its vote?:
lots of challenges ... trying different cuts to remove the abstratness, different DOFs to see if it improves to your eye.
Summary:
This is a good shot. You should be pleased. Keep on shooting.
If you've got any questions about this critique, please feel free to contact me via the PM system.
Cheers
Kari |
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04/13/2006 10:38:57 PM |
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04/12/2006 07:34:05 AM |
| Well done, i like this a lot. |
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