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04/18/2006 10:01:27 AM |
***Greetings From the Critique club***
First of i have to say thank you for entering the challenge, its what keeps dpc going,
lets start.
first off you lighting and setup is good,
the only thing the really takes my attetion away at first is the line where the two peices of paper come together,
your color is good, i like the white background, i like the subjets they are funny, im not sure about the ball, at the same time i like it, it also draws my attetion away,
the sustains:
Your ideas are good,
your lighting is good.
Keep shooting
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04/11/2006 06:05:38 PM |
that something in the middle bothers me |
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04/11/2006 02:14:25 PM |
The line down the middle takes away from this image for me. |
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04/09/2006 12:17:56 PM |
Ha ha, this is really funny, I would have cloned out the line in the middle but you have good lighting and composition. |
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04/08/2006 03:58:19 PM |
Very comical, not sure that line in the back was intentional, though? |
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04/07/2006 01:24:00 PM |
LOL - Very Cute. Pity bout the line in the middle |
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04/07/2006 04:39:55 AM |
My eye keeps going to the line down the back...was this intentional to try splitting them or just happened to be there? Either way for me it is a little distracting. Nice clear shot though...good details on them. |
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04/07/2006 01:14:45 AM |
Too bad you can see where the paper edges meet, and it's a little too sharp. But I like it anyway...good idea and composition and color. |
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04/06/2006 10:15:31 PM |
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04/06/2006 09:34:51 AM |
that's adorable! i love it!!! totally captured every childhood fight i ever had! well done |
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04/05/2006 02:51:31 AM |
superbe.... a ribbon for you... I'm sure...
Simpa |
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04/04/2006 09:30:40 PM |
I like the tongue sticking out ... blahhhzzz. But, what's with the line down the middle, it fades at the bottom? |
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Photographer found comment helpful. |
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