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04/06/2006 05:17:58 AM |
| I agree with the other comments, the composition could be helped by having the little girl looking at what is in her hands... this would help better convey a sense of "play". As it stands, the image itself could be helped with a better crop. By cropping out the bow and "wheelhouse" of the "ship", more focus would be placed on your subject. Since the girl and the "wheelhouse" dominate the image, they are both competing for the viewers attention. Also try playing around with levels to add more "pop" to the image. |
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04/03/2006 10:57:11 AM |
| Nice composition. Face and eyes would be better, and punch up the saturation for playful color. |
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03/29/2006 10:25:31 PM |
| The pic could have been improved with post processing to make the colours brighter. It seems quite drab and unexciting. |
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03/29/2006 07:04:10 AM |
| The composition needs work |
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03/28/2006 10:24:27 PM |
| LITTLE GIRL LOOKING WRONG DIRECTION. |
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