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03/26/2006 08:28:38 PM |
| I nice idea, but a bad picture. The time-stamp is almost never a good idea; the colors are horribly weak; the image isn't exactly "sharp"; really, it just looks as though you snapped this off with a camera-phone. Sorry if this is harsh, but I don't have much else to say, here. |
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03/25/2006 12:37:06 PM |
| You need to turn off the date stamp |
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03/25/2006 12:34:01 PM |
| the date should not be on this, and better focus and exposure |
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03/23/2006 09:11:25 AM |
| You realy need to turn the date off. Cute idea, and the leading lines of the grass and the paths work well to pull the eye into the hands, though the lamp pole does not. |
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03/23/2006 08:29:06 AM |
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03/22/2006 11:34:11 PM |
| badly exposed, date stamp always kills a photo |
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03/22/2006 07:33:26 PM |
| See if you can't turn off the time stamp on the camera...it distracts from the picture. |
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03/22/2006 07:28:45 PM |
| Nice composition, but the Datestamp forces me to give you a lower score |
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03/22/2006 05:42:23 PM |
| I love the framing and the composition and the red green and neutral colour arrangement. What bothers me is the hot spot seen from in between the hands. There's almost nothing except white there. Also a little more DoF could have helped. |
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03/22/2006 03:27:10 PM |
i like the almost heart shape this has formed. some suggestions that i'm sure you're going to get barraged with, but i'll say them anyway:
1) ah! gotta get rid of that date stamp. "March 17 2006" is intruding upon your composition!
2) for most purposes on this website bigger is better. the size on this was perhaps a bit too conservative.
3) ignoring the date stamp, the weakest element of the photo, I think, is the background. your subject is obviously the hands holding one another, so a background with minimized contrast/busyness would be best. in the case of this photo you have the grass (which isn't a horrible background) giving way to a very bright sky. the result is that the sky looks washed out and "glows" while the subject becomes dim and loses contrast. this is a good idea for a photo, but definitely a more solid, consistent background would be a good idea, because it'll bring out the subject better. |
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03/22/2006 08:43:03 AM |
| The time stamp is distracting |
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03/22/2006 01:30:22 AM |
| Probably would look better without the date stamp. |
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