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03/21/2006 04:17:59 AM |
Seems like a bit of a disconnect with the type on the page versus an ink pen. Why not write the words out instead of sticking a piece of paper on the notepad? The message is funny. Lighting is a little harsh (a softbox or light tent would help some with this).
Anyway. Good luck in the challenge. ;^) |
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03/19/2006 10:33:33 AM |
| i kinda share the feeling (esp. since i recently started to teach at a univesity here :-) and at first look i liked the composition and your choice of colors. but after second look i wander why the letters next to the pen are printed and not handwritten, why the line beneath them gets thin... it make is too artificial, not a remark someone would write in school when bored... |
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03/19/2006 08:39:37 AM |
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03/18/2006 08:14:21 PM |
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03/18/2006 01:35:18 PM |
| Cute idea. Would have been better if the words were written on with that marker/pen rather than typed and stuck on. It just doesn't go together. |
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03/16/2006 01:31:06 PM |
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03/16/2006 12:29:34 PM |
| i like the simple concept and the composition, but i think better lighting would improve the shot a lot |
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03/16/2006 12:06:39 AM |
| they still say that in high school? :) |
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03/15/2006 08:36:21 AM |
| I would have preferred to see handwriting instead of something pasted in. Good idea though! |
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03/15/2006 08:32:13 AM |
| you have very neat handwriting |
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03/15/2006 08:07:55 AM |
| Expose on this is a bit uneven, but the big problem I have with it is logistical: "school sucks" is typewritten but there's a markere on the page. I think it would have worked better if you either had "school sucks" typewritten on a page coming out of a typewriter or printer or had it written in marker. |
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03/15/2006 04:30:41 AM |
| i feel like this would've been better handwritten |
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03/14/2006 10:02:36 PM |
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