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08/10/2003 12:09:05 PM |
Greetings from the Critique Club --
My main concern with this photo is that the subject is very difficult to discern. I'm all for abstract photography, but this looks like you were actually trying to frame a subject and just didn't quite do it. One suggestion would be to not have such a tight crop; this would allow the viewer to put the subject in perspective and see that it's a hot spring. It would also allow them to see the scale of the water burst.
On the right side of the photo, the detail, focus, and lighting are just excellent -- really exemplary. If the subject were better defined, this would make a much better photo.
Rob |
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08/03/2003 06:17:16 PM |
| I have to admit, I almost didn't even view this photo because the thumbnail did little to intrigue me. Seeing it full size, I appreciate more what you were trying to achieve. It is an interesting use of light and water to create an unique concept for the challenge. I like the individual droplets seen in the dark area at the top. In this case, leaving that sliver of unfilled space actually enhanced your shot rather than detracting from the value of keeping within the fill the frame theme. I'm afraid it's still not one of my favorite shots but I'm glad I took the time to inspect it further. |
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07/31/2003 03:47:34 PM |
| I dunno, good focus, good crop, but it doesn't grab me, but thats me, overall a cool shot. |
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07/28/2003 04:19:10 AM |
| really needs a subject in there. Nice feel though |
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