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Sing me a song of a lad that is gone...
Sing me a song of a lad that is gone...
Katspetkat


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Challenge: Literary Adventure (Advanced Editing IV)
Camera: HP PhotoSmart 735
Location: Outside Santa Fe
Date: Mar 9, 2006
Aperture: 4.6
ISO: 200
Shutter: 1/383
Galleries: Emotive, Still Life
Date Uploaded: Mar 9, 2006

From a book of selected poems by Robert Louise Stevenson:

Sing me a song of a lad that is gone,
Say, could that lad be I?
Merry of soul he sailed on a day
Over the sea to Skye

Mull was astern, Rum on the port,
Eigg on the starboard bow;
Glory of youth glowed in his soul;
Where is that glory now?

Sing me a song of a lad that is gone,
Say, could that lad be I?
Merry of soul he sailed on a day
Over the sea to Skye.

Give me again all that was there,
Give me the sun that shone!
Give me the eyes, give me the soul,
Give me the lad that's gone!

Sing me a song of a lad that is gone,
Say, could that lad be I?
Merry of soul he sailed on a day
Over the sea to Skye.

Billow and breeze, islands and seas,
Mountains of rain and sun,
All that was good, all that was fair,
All that was me is gone.

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I cropped, used brightness/contrast, desaturated, resized and added the border. Again thank you for your comments.

Statistics
Place: 89 out of 165
Avg (all users): 5.6263
Avg (commenters): 7.2000
Avg (participants): 5.4722
Avg (non-participants): 5.7203
Views since voting: 1882
Views during voting: 265
Votes: 190
Comments: 7
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03/26/2006 04:32:35 PM
Fantastic! Must fave it.
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03/26/2006 01:49:21 PM
*Critique Club*

"Sing me a song of a lad that is gone..." is a nice addition to Literary Adventure challenge. I personally had not seen this poem before, but I figured from the title it was of a young child. Not too bad of a placement, the upper 50% is always good.

I think you made an excellent choice with the black and white for this piece. I think using the tree to frame out the shot was a nice idea. On my screen the black looks a tad to dark. The glow on the horse is nice and I also like the include of the boat it gives more to the subject. This a very nice emotional piece, it grabs your attention with the deep contrast in the black and white. I like the white border it makes the image complete.

This was a really good piece, I look forward to your future entries.
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 Comments Made During the Challenge
03/18/2006 11:45:10 AM
cant think of n e songs but nice pic!
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03/13/2006 03:39:23 PM
Well done...very emotive shot. Good composition. Black and white is perfect for this scene. A little dark along the top but still fairly well balanced. Coupled with your choice of title and comes together fairly strong. Nice job!
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03/13/2006 12:22:56 PM
Nice framing with the tree. I think the image could/should be a little sharper and wonder what the scene would look like with the horse rocking? The title does make me think of the 'lad' that is no more.
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03/13/2006 02:41:00 AM
How melancholy, but a lovely photo! 10
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03/12/2006 07:33:44 PM
say shall that lad be I. Merry a soul he sailed on a day over the sea to I.

I learned that in elementary school. I probably have the wording wrong, but I remember singing it in 3rd grade. Wow. Thanks for the memory.
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