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03/14/2006 02:31:26 AM |
Greetings from the Critique Club!
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Conclusion: Overall an above average composition which perfectly conveys comfort :) but beauty has its own downside- the model is somehow taking the focus away from the central theme :) Anyway, the use of soft focus and warm light really gives the feel of comfort. I feel slightly different crop, where white color is less in frame would have balanced the photo in terms of color distribution. I think many of the comments also hint at same thing.
There are some great photos in your portfolio. DYNAMIC LINES and SKIN are really nice. Goodluck for your future submissions and looking forward to more great photos from your.
I'm by no means expert in area of photography. My comments are purely based on my limited understanding of technology and art behind digital photography. Apart from doing detailed evaluation of your submission, my intent is to learn different styles of photography by critically evaluating selective submissions. If you've got any questions about this critique, please feel free to contact me via email or PM.
Wish you a great day!
-Tej |
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03/07/2006 10:43:40 AM |
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03/04/2006 03:23:25 AM |
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03/03/2006 03:53:24 PM |
| Attractive model and nice photo. |
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03/02/2006 09:31:50 AM |
Feel that the bottom quarter to third of the image is distrating with its lack of focus. Would have liked to see that cropped out. Also would have liked a true black background.
Skin tone is very nice. |
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03/01/2006 08:33:53 PM |
| I like the depth of field and feeling. 9 |
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03/01/2006 08:18:05 PM |
| She does look very comfortable. The framing seems a little tight though. |
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03/01/2006 05:07:10 AM |
| whats under the red sheet bro |
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03/01/2006 03:25:17 AM |
| Nice composition and colours |
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03/01/2006 01:57:36 AM |
| gorgeous shot...exudes comfort...just a little dark on the side of her face, but lovely colours and a great composition |
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02/28/2006 08:20:11 PM |
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02/28/2006 07:23:11 PM |
| This has a certain sexiness. I think I'd crop about the bottom 4th. It's too blurred and really doesn't add to the image. The woman's face is pretty and nicely focused. |
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