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03/10/2006 12:03:25 PM |
*Critique Club*
The first thing that hits me when I look at the image is the flash reflections on the statue. Judging by the light in your background, you may not have needed a flash at all. I think the statues look better dark - almost like silhouettes. The focus is more on the statue in front which doesn't convey a sense of partnership with the statue in the background. The angle you shot from also obscures the face of the background statue. If you want to draw on the pair as sisters, that background statue needs to have more weight in the composition.
This was your fifth entry, so I hope to see you continue to shoot. Just keep your mind on your subject, lighting, and composition.
Amy |
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03/07/2006 02:09:21 PM |
| I don't see comfort in this one. |
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03/06/2006 05:46:43 AM |
| composition seems off with the little girl in the back getting covered. Also, the highlights are distracting. |
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03/04/2006 09:13:29 AM |
| The lighting really hurts this shot. The flash is too harsh on the foreground statue and the background one is too dark. Maybe a different time of day would have been better. |
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03/04/2006 03:47:49 AM |
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03/02/2006 01:50:10 PM |
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03/01/2006 07:28:52 AM |
| is there any way to soften your flash? |
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 Photographer found comment helpful. |
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03/01/2006 04:43:53 AM |
| the light is too harsh and doesnt match the scene |
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| Photographer found comment helpful. |
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