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03/02/2006 04:45:11 PM |
Greeetings from the Critique Club!
First, Welcome to DPChallenge! I see this is your first entry and what an entry! I love this shot and I love the composition. Very nice lines leading me in, taking me up the arm and through the body. And a nice body, ;-) ;)
So what went wrong? Well, as said in earlier comments, the high contrast is a bit much for this to me and I like high contrast shots most of the time. But there are too many hot spots where all detail gets washed out. If there was a way to leave the contrast and high lights on the blinds but soften the body somehow I think this shot would just WOW everyone. Being a basic challenge that is very difficult but now outside the challenge maybe, if you want to work it a bit more and see what you could do I would love to see the results.
Hope my comments help and good luck in future challenges!
Deannda |
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02/24/2006 04:55:56 PM |
| Just a little over exposed. |
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02/23/2006 03:03:33 PM |
| I like the shot & concept. Appears to me to be out of focus, unless that was your intent! |
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02/23/2006 07:59:41 AM |
| I like the contrast a lot, but the highlights are a little too hot. The composition is great though. |
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02/23/2006 03:03:50 AM |
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02/22/2006 09:41:33 PM |
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02/22/2006 01:58:47 PM |
| nice photo but it looks a bit overexposed - no pun intended... |
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02/22/2006 12:34:23 PM |
| good shot.. nice use of light and shadows |
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02/22/2006 05:32:16 AM |
| A bit too contrasty for me.. but I like the window blinds at the side. They add an interesting element to this shot. |
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02/22/2006 12:09:24 AM |
| a bit too much contrast for my taste |
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