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03/03/2010 01:28:14 PM |
Seems like the subject's inserting eye drops of light for contact lenses.
I think the half circle ufo, at the top could be removed, or it might lead to the other ufo's of light landing in the eye. An interesting profile with good shadows. |
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02/12/2006 03:06:27 PM |
::: Critique Club :::
Hi, my name is Kari and from the critique club.
First Impression - the most important one:
Not often I get to critique something I commented on. :)
Composition:
I thought this was well composed with good use of DOF.
Subject:
Meets the challenge and is very off centred.
Technical (Colour and light):
Good lighting, good dof, maybe the cropping could have improved the shot and taken it from over average to better.
To grow its vote?:
I think that perhaps the cropping may have been the issue for some ... having the crop slightly wider on the left (looking at the screen) ... may have given a little more proportion.
Summary:
Great shot ... I like your model and use of her here.
If you've got any questions about this critique, please feel free to contact me via the PM system.
Cheers
Kari
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02/05/2006 06:33:39 PM |
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01/29/2006 08:03:59 PM |
| This is a really clever shot. |
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01/29/2006 07:50:35 PM |
| great shot, but the eye looks a little mirky and almost looks unreal...I really like the composition |
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01/29/2006 07:35:44 PM |
| great shot, nice DOF and perfect lighting |
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