::: Critique Club :::
Hi, my name is Kari and from the critique club.
First Impression - the most important one:
Interesting shapes ... and interesting location. I would never have guess.
Interesting to do a critique on your image but it is difficult if you don't give us any information in your photographers comments. When we do a critique, we go past just the photographic result, that's what voters comments do. The critique looks at what you were trying to achieve, how you wanted it to look and what issues you had in getting the image captured and ready for voting.
Composition:
Yes you can say it is off centred, and in that way it works, but really it does not seem to take into account the rule of thirds, which could have helped make this shot, all that would really take is a few more goes at cropping the image.
Subject:
You have met the challenge with gusto!
Technical (Colour and light):
This is one of those times I feel like saying black and white overkill, but I don't know what colours there actually are, and how they could have enhanced the shot.
To grow its vote?:
It was a solid effort, I think that taking a look at how you have cropped may have helped to create better leading lines, and really is thing an image that should be b&w????
Summary:
Good shot, it scored well and is nicely now on the front page of your portfolio. Meets the challenge, and to me that is important ...especially with an out of the box idea!!!
If you've got any questions about this critique, please feel free to contact me via the PM system.
Cheers
Kari |
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