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01/26/2006 06:07:33 PM |
::: Critique Club ::: ladyhawk22
First Impression - the most important one: Great use of DOF and a very good shot!
Composition: Composition of this shot is great. The other people in the photo really help frame the main subject.
Subject: Great choice of subject. The bright clothes mixed with the dark hair really make the subject stand out. Certainly makes for an interesting and captivating image.
Technical (Colour, focus, and light): DOF on this shot is wonderful! Just what I envisioned for this challenge. The colors look good, though it seems to me that there's a slight yellow/green cast in the lighting...though that could be the surroundings. I think the pink makes my brain want to see cool colors as opposed to warm tones (silly brain!) :-) Lighting looks good to me!
To grow its vote?: From the other comments on the photo I think that a slightly different color cast may have improved the vote on this shot. Other than that, I really wouldn't change a thing!
Summary: Very stunning photo and an excellent choice for this challenge! Well done. |
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01/23/2006 12:22:39 AM |
congrats on the top 20, another top pic from you. well done. |
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01/22/2006 08:27:56 PM |
getting good in your old age cuz! :D
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01/22/2006 07:27:07 PM |
Top 20. WOO HOO! Good for you, Rob. |
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01/22/2006 07:08:37 PM |
You were robbed!!! :(. Still a great shot.... |
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Comments Made During the Challenge  |
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01/22/2006 04:43:57 PM |
A very nice take with a penetrating gaze. 7 |
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01/22/2006 05:53:40 AM |
works for me.
Realy nice image
9
good luck
Kev |
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01/22/2006 12:46:31 AM |
great shot ...well done...i love the lighting around the subjects face .... |
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01/21/2006 02:21:55 PM |
Beautiful, nice clear focus, soft colors. |
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01/21/2006 02:17:44 PM |
overall tone seems off. looks yellowish to me. nice composition. |
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01/18/2006 01:29:25 PM |
Proper use of DOF and a nice subject. The other people in the shot do not add to the composition, IMO. |
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01/18/2006 01:18:59 AM |
The colors are a bit strange - too green somehow but other then that - good. |
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01/17/2006 11:54:46 AM |
Great color captured, I like the warm tones, but the computer generated blur on the fore figures is a bit heavy handed. |
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01/16/2006 02:53:58 PM |
Great capture. The colors are muted, and that fits here. Her expression is intriguing. The DOF is almost too great, in my eyes. The person in the bottom right is a bit distracting to me as it is almost indistinguishable. |
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01/16/2006 07:51:01 AM |
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01/16/2006 12:31:04 AM |
This should ribbon... Great job |
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01/15/2006 08:39:05 PM |
Top shot, meets the challenge in every way and is interesting as well. |
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01/15/2006 08:00:35 PM |
The pink of her scarf offsets the greenish yellow tones of the lighted skin. Nice DOF!! |
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