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01/25/2006 10:05:24 AM |
::: Greetings from Critique Club :::
Hi, as requested, here is an indepth critique of your submission.
First Impression - the most important one:
Very nice capture, well executed and fits the challenge well. Also, good B&W conversion.
Composition:
Composition is strong, uses the rule of thirds quite well.
Subject:
Subject is clear and well defined, but perhaps your title doesn't nail the subject in the same way as I see it. I see it more as the man looking straight ahead at what's in his path, while the kid is free to wander. Just my take.
Technical (Colour, focus, and light):
All your techincals are good. Focus is sharp. Exposure is dead-on. Good B&W treatment.
To grow its vote?:
On this challenge, I think the voters were expecting a bigger crowd. That's how I see they voted, but a 5.8 is a respectable score.
Summary:
Keep up this good work. You definitely know how to work your camera in public places now.
Hope to see more from you soon,
Leroy |
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01/25/2006 02:33:53 AM |
| great feel and depth; I love the crop; nice work. |
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01/22/2006 05:09:49 PM |
| Very nice human study collection. 7 |
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01/22/2006 04:22:11 AM |
| Love the photo journalistic feeling of this shot. great capture. |
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01/22/2006 02:43:23 AM |
| I love it when they glance at the camera and you manage to snap one before the moment goes away. Composition a little awkward but the image is engaging. |
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01/20/2006 08:40:50 AM |
| Good street candid and a nice choice for B&W. |
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01/19/2006 01:28:39 PM |
| Nice attempt, dead on b&w, nice dof, interesting light, overall very good stuff |
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01/19/2006 05:09:19 AM |
| DOF isolation is not used sufficiently in this shot. Also, the composition is not very good: there shot is a bit messy, e.g. the half-face of a woman in the foreground doesn't add anything to it. |
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01/15/2006 10:21:28 PM |
| Hehe, good capture. Met the challenge perfectly and the bonus is the kid's wonderful expression |
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