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01/17/2006 03:26:00 PM |
| I find the spaghetti in the background distracting. Some sharper reflection in the knife I think would help define it for what it is. |
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01/17/2006 02:30:26 PM |
| focus could be a little bit better and the "spaghetti" in the background is more of a distraction than a help I think, nice perspective though - I feel like I might cry! |
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01/17/2006 08:11:44 AM |
| The arrangement and composition is fine in this image but the softer focus loses fine detail that the eye would like to see and that acts as a visual distraction. Looks like the background is in sharper focus than the onion. Shooting at a higher f/stop would increase DOF and eliminate that problem. |
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01/15/2006 11:43:59 AM |
| On my monitor the onion seems too white/bright and not enough detail |
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01/15/2006 11:23:22 AM |
| This one would have been better if the spaghetti letters wheren't there but only black. But it is still a good one. |
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01/15/2006 11:01:32 AM |
| The spaghetti in the background sort of distracts abit. Nice photo. (My eyes almost stung.) |
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01/13/2006 05:12:46 PM |
| nice composition and detail. the white the onion is a little overpowering but that could be my panel |
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01/13/2006 07:18:49 AM |
| Good composition, in need of sharpening and different lighting...6 |
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01/13/2006 06:25:12 AM |
| I have the impression the white in the onion is too much blown out. Or is it out of focus. I wonder what the actual result will be of your recipe... |
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01/12/2006 08:10:33 AM |
| Frame is overpowering, focus seems slightly off. Onion looks good. |
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01/11/2006 09:28:42 AM |
| would like to see the rings in the onion or some real sharpness in teh chopped ones |
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01/11/2006 08:54:58 AM |
| I like the placement of the word in the background. I think the top right is a bit noisy, but this is a fine photograph, nonetheless. |
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01/11/2006 04:47:15 AM |
good composition, the background is too dark..and it doesn't meet the challenge(actually it's a stretch on the theme)
good luck |
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01/11/2006 04:29:44 AM |
This isn't a culinary challenge, so I won't speak about your diced onions. The composition is alright, but I would have thought having the other half onion a bit further away might be better. I'm not exactly sure what's wrong with the picture, but something isn't work well and it throws me off quite a bit. Maybe it's because it looks like you've got a camera flash going on.
I must admit the frames should have been a lot thinner. It's too thick and it causes quite a lot of distraction to the whole image. So I threw you a 5. |
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01/10/2006 11:08:41 PM |
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01/10/2006 10:51:42 PM |
| the tears are welling up already |
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