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01/13/2006 08:22:02 PM |
**** Greeting from the Critique Club ****
Okay first impression at voting and now: Very cheesy, pun intended.
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Challenge
- Relevant to the Challenge? Yes
- Is subject unique (vs. unoriginal or rehashed)? Yes
Compostion
- Good or Bad? How can it be fixed? The use of ?construction paper? meats on the pizza seems to be an attempt at humor that I don't quite understand. I can empathize as I have a very dry sense of humor and think that I am funny when others disagree. I like tha off centered plate, although I might have turned the pizza crust down and right to make it easier to grab. ;)
- Good use of Depth of Field? Yes
- Good focus? Yes
Lighting
- Good use of light? Yes. The reflection give dimension to the plate, however maybe soften the lighting a little.
- Good use of shadows? Unfortunately ther are no shadows with this viewpoint.
Aesthetics/Artistic Appeal:
- Colors and Contrast. I would have to say that the plate and pepperoni's are not the same color is the first thing that I notice. It bothers me, but maybe I am a bit anal about these things. Change the plate. Go with purple or white or something different. To keep the eye from judging the differences.
- Sharpness. Nicely done.
- What is my reaction or feelings? I don't get it, to be honest. Which shape am I evaluating? The plate? The pizza? The pepperoni? I think it's the last, but I am not certain.
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01/09/2006 07:04:59 AM |
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01/08/2006 01:35:36 PM |
| Love the colours. It looks slightly OOF from here but that may be just because the tomatoe doesn't look right |
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01/07/2006 04:18:30 PM |
ewwww...you actually eat that stuff???
(ironically there is a pizza commercial on TV as soon as this opened) |
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01/07/2006 07:40:54 AM |
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01/07/2006 06:41:00 AM |
| The pepperoni looks like construction paper to me but great idea for a graphic shot. Lighting is good too, highlights are a bit harsh on the plate. |
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01/05/2006 01:10:27 AM |
hehe reminds me of my childhood. :)
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01/04/2006 06:40:47 PM |
| Something doesn't seem quite right with the pepperoni. Also, I don't know if it would be possible to avoid, but three of the reflections of light are very white and distracting. Very dramatic choice of colors though. |
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01/04/2006 12:56:42 PM |
| Is that a tombstone? Lol... good photograph... Make sure you get yourself out of the reflection in future shots, but it's really well balanced. |
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