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01/13/2006 09:39:58 AM |
CRITIQUE CLUB!
i think this is a fine skyline view, but i'm not sure this is the most effective type of shot for this challenge.
this is a great point of view of a city, but to me it doesn't say a lot about life within the city itself. the image itself is full of different places to look, but leaves the viewer without a single focal point on which to concentrate. perhaps trying to isolate a few of the more interesting buildings might have been better?
i would also try to increase the contrast of the image. the colors all seem very flat -- it appears that the day was kind of hazy anyway, but you can boost the range of tones throughout the image and give it a bit more impact.
rob |
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01/10/2006 10:12:14 AM |
| It really is above it all. |
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01/09/2006 07:55:35 PM |
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01/09/2006 12:54:36 PM |
| A little bit of a color cast, but nice picture otherwise. |
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01/06/2006 05:38:34 PM |
| Nothing's really "wrong" here, but it's not a terribly interesting picture, either. |
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01/06/2006 03:31:53 PM |
| OK snapshot but not very visually compelling |
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01/06/2006 10:21:25 AM |
| Good vantage point, but not that interesting. |
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01/05/2006 08:50:51 PM |
| the sky is really grey and washed out |
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01/05/2006 07:36:50 PM |
| Now this is city life - masses and masses, going on for ever. Great shot. |
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01/05/2006 04:35:45 PM |
| Nice Sky Line shot! great perspectice, only wish it had been a little less polluted that day for you, lol. |
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01/04/2006 06:35:05 PM |
| Impressive what men can do... |
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01/04/2006 06:31:18 PM |
| It's a nice cityscape shot - nice early morning (perhaps late afternoon) colours. It doesn't really convey much about "City Life" to me though. Other than that it's a good photo - nice colour, brightness, sharpness, etc. |
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01/04/2006 05:52:35 PM |
| Like the morning/evening glow |
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01/04/2006 03:17:08 PM |
| Composition is ok. The choice of subject matter is ok. The image quality is ok. - 5 |
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01/04/2006 11:24:35 AM |
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01/04/2006 12:15:38 AM |
| photo looks a bit dull. i think it would have looked better in another light or at night with all the city lights maybe? |
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01/03/2006 09:21:44 PM |
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01/03/2006 07:45:02 PM |
| nice leading lines to the tall buildings. colors are so muted i would have liked to see this as a high contrast black and white |
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