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Challenge: Mother (Advanced Editing IV)
Camera: Kodak DX4900
Location: Upstate NY, USA
Date: Jan 1, 2006
Aperture: 3.5
ISO: 1/45s
Shutter: 120
Galleries: Family, Snapshot
Date Uploaded: Jan 1, 2006
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This is my first entry to a "member" challenge - I know I'm allowed "advanced" editing, but I'm still only capable of "basic" :)
Thanks again to whoever purchased my gift membership - it was nice being able to contribute to this particular challenge.
Thanks to my model, Sarah, expecting a baby girl due February 14th. I promised her some prints of this and some others that I took for her Baby Book :) and though she said it was fine, I felt hesitant to place her face on the internet, so this image is actually a zoom in and crop of a full image.
Editing: rotate, zoom, crop, auto levels, desat, blackpoint, gamma, contrast, despeckle, sharpen, re-size, and border.
Notes: I just wanted this to have that soft look without being too blurry - but it doesn't seem I could do it just right. Also, lighting seems to look a little blown out - especially on her lap. Full color was nice but a bit too harsh, black and white was also nice - especially the contrast of her sweater detail but I'm going with this desaturated version because I think the pink adds some femininity.
I still have lots to learn......thanks for all the votes and comments, I appreciate them :) |
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01/11/2006 11:58:31 PM |
Hello Shannon, it's me from the Critique Club again!
(I'm not stalking you; these critique allocations are quite random, so the fact I did one on an image of yours just a week ago is just an absurd coincidence.)
I like this one a little less, as it happens. Technically it seems OK, especially the raking light, which I think came from a window. The desaturation has made the light look a little cold, especially on the hands - it was probably a little 'warmer' than that in the original image. On the other hand, the desaturation has been used with a purpose, and a purpose that is consistent with your aim for the image. I personally don't care for desaturation too much, but at least you've had a reason for doing it (most people don't seem to). The composition and crop is not too interesting ... I know you didn't want to show Sarah's face here, but this alternative does rob the image of much of its potential meaning. The hands do their best, but it's faces, and specifically eyes, that tell the story of the kind of emotion you are after here.
There are some compression artifacts visible, especially on the curve of the near chair arm. I think you'll eliminate that if you save your files for DPC to the permitted maximum of 150KB (yours is only 55KB).
Here's a link to a tutorial that will help you to size and save your images to best advantage on DPC.
Nice to see you again! Best wishes to Sarah ... a baby on Valentine's Day, that's pretty memorable.
Paul |
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01/08/2006 04:37:01 AM |
the expected arrival a bundle of joy
will soon be here to comfort and hold
whether it be a girl or boy
my hearts love shall forever behold |
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01/05/2006 02:58:10 PM |
| Nice use of natural light here. |
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01/05/2006 03:10:56 AM |
| Nice backlight, works really well with the texture of the top |
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01/04/2006 06:10:26 PM |
| The lighting is lovely and really enhances the emotional impact of the image. |
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01/04/2006 05:14:30 AM |
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01/03/2006 05:26:01 PM |
| Focus probably could have been slightly better |
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01/03/2006 04:43:45 PM |
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01/03/2006 03:52:01 PM |
| Composition is ok. Good choice of subject matter. Nice image quality. Has potential of being really creative. - 5 |
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01/03/2006 01:09:12 AM |
| Great composition and subject matter, and an equally super great photo as well........ |
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01/02/2006 10:56:51 PM |
| gorgeous.. perfect for the challenge..10 |
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01/02/2006 04:12:50 PM |
| LOVE IT! The epitomy of the word MOTHER. Excellent shot and interpretation of the challenge! |
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01/02/2006 03:48:51 PM |
| nice natural lighting good image for the challenge bumping up |
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01/02/2006 01:45:25 PM |
| Very well done! I love it. |
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01/02/2006 01:01:38 PM |
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01/02/2006 12:59:54 PM |
| I'm guessing this is windowlight. It's a little harsh and we are left with a bluish tint to mom's hands. The idea in nice though. I'd like a portrait crop and to see a reflective look on mom's face. |
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01/02/2006 10:32:01 AM |
| I like the composition and the classic (if a bit cliche) placement of the subject in a rocking chair. I don't for the busy texture that the ribbing on the sweater creates in combination with the radiator grill in the background. I also don't care for the choice to crop out her head. Why not show future mom's expression? |
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01/02/2006 09:28:03 AM |
| This is very nice - the window light is wonderful. Her hands look so gentle on the baby. All the leading lines point inward right to the center of the belly, draws the viewers attention and keeps it. i like the background wall paper as a contrasting texture. |
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01/02/2006 08:19:18 AM |
| beautiful idea, great lighting, there seem to be some compression artifacts, and the hands seem unnaturaly desat? strange colors (specially on the right hand). Perhaps a little more space for the elbow to fit would be nice |
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