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07/15/2003 12:13:58 PM |
Greetings from the Critique Club!...
COMPOSITION... The blurred motion of the needle easily conveys the feeling of speed, and so meets the challenge easily. Compositionally, it probably would have succeeded more if distracting elements were eliminated - namely the hand. The black space between fabric and machine may also be considered as distracting, but not sure what the image would look like if the fabric extended from where it is now to the machine (if shot from a higher angle).
TECHNIQUE... A histogram of the image reveals your image is undexposed. A levels adjustment can correct this. Otherwise, focus and sharpness is good. |
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07/07/2003 05:36:28 AM |
| I like your originality. You have shown the speed of your machine very well, and its a nicely executed shot too. 7 |
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07/06/2003 08:18:34 PM |
| great idea and execution. i am torn between having fingers in the shot or not having them. not having them in the shot would help strengthen the subject through having less distractions. but having them in the shot helps add some realism. i guess its just a personal preference either way. |
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07/06/2003 04:53:06 AM |
| A little more motion shown in this one would've went a long way. I think the concept is very good and very original, but the portrayal of motion is too faint. |
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07/05/2003 01:00:18 PM |
| this is a well done shot, it definetly demonstrates speed! |
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07/04/2003 10:36:48 PM |
| a very nice different meaning of the speed! |
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07/04/2003 05:59:34 AM |
| Need work?......good shot and captures the speed well |
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07/03/2003 10:26:22 PM |
| Original idea! Good lighting. |
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07/03/2003 09:47:57 PM |
| I like the different approach. I think some interest could be added by pumping up the colors a bit. |
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07/03/2003 07:16:58 AM |
| Nice job. Like the motion you captured. Wish there was just a little more contrast. =-) 6 |
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07/02/2003 10:25:54 AM |
| another interesting subject matter. very creative. |
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07/02/2003 08:11:29 AM |
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07/02/2003 08:10:32 AM |
| Neat idea, and it meets the challenge. I do think the composition could of been improved. The fingers really don't add to the shot and a tighter focus on the foot would of drawn the eye. |
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07/02/2003 01:02:34 AM |
| nice subject... (has some specks in it?) |
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