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12/20/2005 01:59:30 PM |
| Must be related to Mr Bill, made us smile anyway LOL |
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12/20/2005 09:43:17 AM |
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12/17/2005 07:24:05 AM |
It's a cute idea, but it suffers from some technical challenges to make it really come through to the viewer.
1) I would have used deli sliced cheese (or even sliced your own off a loaf of velveeta) to make the cheese itself look more attractive.
2) Clean up the crumbs from the plate.
3) The lighting is poor, get rid of the shadows!
4) Nothing is critically sharp or really in focus. Use focus to draw the viewer to what you want them to see.
I hope these comments help. |
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12/16/2005 04:21:25 PM |
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12/16/2005 11:02:18 AM |
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12/14/2005 11:44:24 AM |
| Nice try; maybe next time try to avoid the shadow |
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12/14/2005 10:16:37 AM |
| original idea and the drawing given to cheese is quite carried out, good light but attention with the reflection |
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12/14/2005 07:31:44 AM |
| I really like the concept... white bread might have been easier to work with and been easier to light |
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12/14/2005 06:39:31 AM |
| I thought it was funny. Best attempt I've seen here to but face on cheese. But top slice is annoying -- better to lay it flat on plate and show it as an open-face sandwich. |
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12/14/2005 06:16:47 AM |
| Clever idea, but from the strong reflections, it looks like you missed step one, remove cellophane. :) |
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12/14/2005 05:33:43 AM |
| Cute idea, focus seems off. |
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