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12/22/2005 10:24:38 AM |
Originally posted by psychephylax: Say Cheese!: The old photographer's cliché is now a challenge topic. Use cheese as the subject of your photo to make your audience smile.
I hate to be playing English teacher here or come off as a DNMC critic, especially that English is NOT my native language but dissecting the description makes it pretty clear:
USE CHEESE as the SUBJECT of your photo to make YOUR AUDIENCE SMILE.
Based on the capitalized letters I had the following expectations in this challenge:
1. There would be cheese (even if implied) in the photo (Cheddar, Swiss, Gouda...etc). This cheese would be the SUBJECT of the photo. (Subject - Synonyms: matter, topic, theme. These nouns denote the principal idea or point of a speech, a piece of writing, or an artistic work.)
2. This is open to discussion but by Audience I would assume either the voters, or, someone in the photo looking at cheese
3. the photo would be somewhat funny as to make me smile.
After reviewing your photo, I feel it does not meet the challenge either because there is no cheese in the photo or because it's not funny. Or both. |
Thanks you for your honest Critique and Explanation, It is my mistake that didn't pay more attention to the topic Thanks once again and appreciate your time. Cheers, |
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12/22/2005 10:21:09 AM |
Originally posted by Judi: Congratulations on your first entry Ameedie. |
It seems I was out of topic, I don't know how the heck I didn't get the meaning :) Any way, it is a try, more to come latter :) Thanks for your comment dear, Cheers, |
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12/20/2005 07:51:43 PM |
Congratulations on your first entry Ameedie. |
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12/20/2005 01:11:41 PM |
Doesn't meet the challenge .. no cheese. :( |
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12/20/2005 09:43:42 AM |
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12/19/2005 10:16:11 PM |
Use cheese as the subject of your photo to make your audience smile.
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12/19/2005 05:49:46 AM |
Where's the cheese? Spooky picture. |
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12/17/2005 04:12:36 PM |
Awesome picture!! It's off the topic. "Use cheese as the subject of your photo to make your audience smile." I'm still giving it a good score. Congrats!
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12/17/2005 09:50:12 AM |
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12/16/2005 05:00:25 PM |
Say Cheese!: The old photographer's cliché is now a challenge topic. Use cheese as the subject of your photo to make your audience smile.
I hate to be playing English teacher here or come off as a DNMC critic, especially that English is NOT my native language but dissecting the description makes it pretty clear:
USE CHEESE as the SUBJECT of your photo to make YOUR AUDIENCE SMILE.
Based on the capitalized letters I had the following expectations in this challenge:
1. There would be cheese (even if implied) in the photo (Cheddar, Swiss, Gouda...etc). This cheese would be the SUBJECT of the photo. (Subject - Synonyms: matter, topic, theme. These nouns denote the principal idea or point of a speech, a piece of writing, or an artistic work.)
2. This is open to discussion but by Audience I would assume either the voters, or, someone in the photo looking at cheese
3. the photo would be somewhat funny as to make me smile.
After reviewing your photo, I feel it does not meet the challenge either because there is no cheese in the photo or because it's not funny. Or both. |
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12/15/2005 09:59:12 PM |
Did she burn her hair for this one? Nice job with the shadows, looks perfectly exposed for the lighting you had here. |
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12/15/2005 06:09:59 PM |
There's no cheese in this picture. The challenge was to use cheese. There's no cheese in this picture. |
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12/15/2005 05:57:24 AM |
Beautiful picture. Love the sparks and the shadow is terrific. |
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12/15/2005 05:15:46 AM |
i think this would have been better if she wasn't so close to wall, so the entire background went dark - i gave it a 6 |
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12/15/2005 01:32:52 AM |
where's d cheese gone???? |
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12/14/2005 08:48:56 AM |
A marvellous enlightened smile all. Very strong contrasts and a beautiful luminosity |
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12/14/2005 06:25:30 AM |
Great shot, love the browns and the HAIR! |
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12/14/2005 05:17:22 AM |
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12/14/2005 03:54:09 AM |
Technically it's an interesting shot. I do like the gigantic shadow.
Unfortunatley, it's a tired idea, and not the best executed of the entries in this class. |
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12/14/2005 02:15:37 AM |
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12/13/2005 07:54:23 PM |
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12/13/2005 07:22:27 PM |
looks like she has a super afro! very cool shot though |
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