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12/17/2005 09:10:36 PM |
Not enough of the candle element for me. Sorry. |
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12/14/2005 04:47:20 PM |
Great composition of this shot. |
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12/14/2005 06:55:38 AM |
Wow, there are two of these, bet you didn't think that would happen, at any rate I think this is a great interpretation of this challenge. Wish the two people in front were not in the field. |
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12/13/2005 06:13:18 PM |
Great timing. I would have cropped a little tighter, but I like it. 8 |
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12/13/2005 06:31:53 AM |
This is an photo of interest in regards to photojournalism -documenting events. My critique is that the scene is way to busy as that there are tooooo many elements present that the eye does not have a main subject dominating the scene for us to train our attention on. There are numerous photos of John Lennon, flowers, candles a person's pants and elbow visible on the left hand side, a camera visible on the right hand side, etc. It comes off too much like a quick snapshot. Training the composition to focus on a few objects in the scene would greatly strengthen the visual and emotional impact of the photo - say a tighter focus on John Lennon's face on the center and the words imagine is one suggestion. Another is if you were positioned at a different angle such that when that person in the background was placing that lighted candle down next to the words "Imagine" would be another (visually and emotionally this would be a great photo for it says in a visual message that his words and hope for a better world has not died out - the flame still burns brightly as does his memory) |
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12/12/2005 06:32:30 PM |
two of these, what are the odds? |
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12/12/2005 06:24:18 PM |
Nice idea for the theme but the outside lighting takes away from the candlelight. |
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12/12/2005 06:12:42 AM |
this would have improved with a little crop on the lef right and top, this persons camera on the right side is distracting to me. |
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