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12/17/2005 12:55:31 AM |
** Greetings from the Critique Club **
Composition: the utensils are too squared off in my mind. Also - too much empty space around them.
Technical factors:
Focus seems to be on the spoon - which is not all bad, but leaves the knife appearing faded aqnd lost in the image.
Contrast: would try to increase the gray scale, and tone down the brightness of the white.
Color: not much here except gray and blown out whites.
This was not an easy challenge to come up with a creative idea. You just need to keep working at it and try to make the shots be something you would value more than the DPC community. Shoot for yourself first - then for the challenges.
- Linda |
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12/11/2005 02:49:15 AM |
| It's very empty ... I feel like there is something missing and maybe the fork blends a bit to much with the bacground. |
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12/08/2005 11:51:51 PM |
| Too much burnout, espcially in the fork. And the composition is lacking. |
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12/05/2005 07:48:50 AM |
| pity the fork is a little blown out in the whites. |
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12/05/2005 06:07:02 AM |
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12/05/2005 04:10:37 AM |
| Very nice against the white, the handles almost disappear. |
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12/05/2005 12:48:46 AM |
| they appear as though they are floating |
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