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12/10/2005 11:15:35 AM |
Oh My
Er, uhm, well, ok. Sorry, I'm a little intimidated!
*Salut from the critique club!*
You're my first ribboning CC, so, here goes nothing! :)
First off, excellent picture. Nice depth of focus, excellent composition, interesting subject matter, and well lit.
Here are the only things I can find to nit pick about. While I like the shells going from dark to light, did you try it going the other way? I see some nice color gradients in the lighter shells in the background, and I wonder how it would look going from light to dark.
The other, thing, though I don't know if this would work, is to maybe turn the shells ends towards the viewer just a touch so you can see more of the spiral pattern at the shells end.
So, not much to critique on an excellent, well deserved riboon shot.
Good luck, and have you thought about becoming a member? More challenges to enter! :)
Cheers
Pidge |
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12/08/2005 05:46:05 PM |
| hmm i hadnt noticed this one durign the challenge.... good thing others did! good job |
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12/07/2005 09:45:29 AM |
| Hi all, just love to be here. Thanks to you all. |
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12/07/2005 08:32:41 AM |
A lovely image it looks like a line of eye balls LOL!
Congratulations on your ribbon
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12/07/2005 08:17:09 AM |
| Congratulations! Beautiful image. |
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12/07/2005 06:36:11 AM |
| Very nice..!! Congratulations..!! |
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12/07/2005 01:36:18 AM |
| Simple, effective, interesting and technically well done. Everything it takes to win a ribbon. Congratulations. |
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12/07/2005 01:05:49 AM |
Congratulations on your yellow ribbon.
S. |
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12/06/2005 11:35:41 PM |
| Congratulations on your ribbon ! Great shot ! |
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12/06/2005 10:45:09 PM |
| Dear Albireo, wonderful composition, gave it a 10. The way you present this collection is really artistic ! The light and shadow play is well chosen to enhance this geometric setup. Well done. Yours, Jan |
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12/06/2005 07:30:30 PM |
| congrats on your ribbon. Great photo |
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12/06/2005 07:29:12 PM |
| Congratulations on your Yellow with this arrow of shells whose lighting and composition leave nothing else to be desired. A bullseye! Congratulations on your Yellow. |
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12/06/2005 04:17:15 PM |
| simple, clean, refreshing to the eye. very nicely done. |
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12/06/2005 12:57:17 PM |
| Perfect composition, lighting and impact... IMO, best in challenge... well done... :) |
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12/06/2005 08:30:35 AM |
| This is one of my two top picks for this challenge. |
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12/06/2005 07:28:04 AM |
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12/05/2005 09:07:34 PM |
| A really nice, simple composition. |
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12/05/2005 09:45:48 AM |
| Great pic, one of my tops. Perfect focus and composition, my only concern is that the shells get washed out a bit towards the far end. If that cannot be helped maybe the darker shells should be at the farthest end to compensate. |
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12/05/2005 02:28:01 AM |
| Original composition. Very nice! |
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12/04/2005 06:28:22 PM |
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12/04/2005 04:26:46 AM |
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12/03/2005 04:40:00 PM |
| A strong composition with exceptionally good lighting. |
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12/01/2005 03:25:03 AM |
| Wow, Very nice. Love all the lines and curves. Great way to display them in a row like that. |
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12/01/2005 02:08:38 AM |
| This is really neat! Great job! |
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11/30/2005 05:00:27 PM |
| whoa~amazing shot. nice set up~ |
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11/30/2005 04:26:22 PM |
| I expect this one to ribbon, great DOF, lighting, angle... Nicely done! |
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11/30/2005 02:55:19 PM |
try a pict ure filling the all frame
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11/30/2005 01:48:55 PM |
| very nice soft image with a good composition |
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11/30/2005 01:33:01 PM |
| Nice arrangement. It's nice to see these perfect shapes in a line (not just a pile as many of the other collection photos seem to be). Great subject. |
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11/30/2005 12:50:09 PM |
| Nice simple and starck minimalism. 9 |
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11/30/2005 11:25:14 AM |
| nice shot. hope you do well! |
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11/30/2005 09:53:17 AM |
| wow i really like this. nice job. |
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11/30/2005 09:24:27 AM |
| Love the alignment of the shells |
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11/30/2005 07:31:13 AM |
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11/30/2005 07:25:32 AM |
| I absolutely love this one!!! |
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11/30/2005 03:51:40 AM |
| Very nice and creative shot!!!A 10!!!!! |
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11/30/2005 01:36:26 AM |
| 8 - Very nice. Criticism; not much, perhaps slightly sharper on some of the foremost shells, but may be difficult to get such good focus on all then so not sure. Like the composition, symmetry, lines and shadows. Maybe just a touch more color/contrast, if possible, but not sure on that. |
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11/29/2005 09:59:28 PM |
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11/29/2005 08:47:40 PM |
| I like the shadow they all create on the white backround. |
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11/29/2005 07:31:58 PM |
| Interesting collection, your exectution is what makes the picture though. |
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